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Hello my name is Brandon Gould I would like to do a review swap

I am already aware of the spelling and grammer and would like to know what i can do to improve my story and some advice on being a better writter below is the Link and Summory of my book and leaving commonts on the pragraghs and chapters are helpful as well

your review will be up as soon as possiable

https://www.webnovel.com/book/arran-ember-the-last-of-the-dra'ghoul-bloodline_20065626606216405

850 years have passed since Zargorwarths defeat and the Vermillion Empires sudden surge in power over the Multiverse. Victor Silvertounge the last of the Guardians of Light, stood overseeing the balance to ensure that it did not fall into the darkness.
Victor could feel a change coming soon, the balance had been shifting and he did not know why but could sense that a Dra’ghoul was about to be born the first one since Draco Dra’ghoul
Emma Silvertounge a Syeer far stronger than any other seen before while only at the young age of sixteen walked pieces of her crimson hair fell in front of her sea-blue eyes and her freckled checks
“ Father, Who is Lupine Riddle ?” She asked Victor froze all time stood still, “ My child. Who told you about him? Victor said slowly his voice trembling with fear
Emma replied “ No one I had a dream and his name popped into my head as did Angel born and Wolfkin. What do they mean?”
Victor did not respond for a moment “ Tell me Emma did you see a Sword of Crimson Fire, a Spear of Golden Light, and an Ax with a wolf's head engraved on the hilt?”
She nodded slowly Victor sighed “ I feared as much. One last question was there a child with a dragon tattoo on his right arm?”
Emma nodded Victor refined from cursing “ my child it would seem that you are somehow linked with this new Dra’ghoul and those you saw in your vision. Do you know where he will be born?”
Emma replied, “ Haven Valley his mother Ashi Ember was just pronounced pregnant.”
Victor picked up his staff and said “ good then we will go and live in Haven Valley post haste.” Emma replied, “ but what about the balance?” Victor paused and said “ There is nothing I can do to prevent what will happen. The Balance will fall to darkness if I am here or not.
Victor turned to Emma who was looking out at the ever-expanding Space-Time Contium the images of her vision burned into her mind never to leave.
Victor placed a hand on her shoulder "We must leave post-haste the sooner we can get to the mother the better."

Emma nodded before they left she went and packed a medium sized bag with cloths, a leather bond book named Tales of Tylingariea by Damion Vixen Dorima and secered a silver blaclet onto her right wrist with a loud click the braclet clamped around her wrist buzzing and turning a dark blue..


she picked up her bag and meet Victer in front of a massive green portal that lead to the Haven. Taking one last look back at the Bridge of Reality Emma walked into the portal and the Wheels of Destiny for her and others were set into motion

      Hello! I'm looking forward to do a review swap. This is my first novel in Webnovel and I wanted to have some reviews so I can improve my work.

      https://www.webnovel.com/book/lurking_20819722105087705###

      Title: LURKING
      Genre: Fantasy romance

      Sypnosis:
      Arete is relieved that finally, she got a job that can sustain her family’s needs and at the same time, pay for their debts. She is now the manager of the famous boy group, Galaxy. But her dream of having a comfortable life immediately shattered when she discovered the secret of the group she was assigned to manage, that they are vampires.

      The vampires tried erasing her memories but they failed. Arete seems to be a special human with an unusual enticing scent and can resist any vampire’s compulsion. Now Arete has no choice but to stay as their manager and keep their secret to her grave.

        "Avatar: Macai's Journey" is a popular Eastern, Romance, and War Story. It is also a fanon spin-off of the "Avatar: The Last Airbender" story. Every episode in this story feels different and AMJ is written with a unique style that directly transports its readers into the Avatar Universe. Not your typical Avatar story, but it still honors the classic franchise.

        It would be an honor to review swap with any of you as I look to promote this story's development and to support other emerging authors. https://www.webnovel.com/book/avatar-macai's-journey_18591839205245005

          Gaureeey Sure, that's perfectly reasonable. Where's the link to your work?

              Gaureeey Found it! Added your work to my collections, kindly do mine as well. As soon as I finish checking my students' thesis, I'm reading yours. You can surely expect the review within the day. Happy reading! :)

                  Gaureeey Hey there! Seeing that your chapters aren't that lengthy, I ended up reading your work instead of my student's thesis. LOL! I've managed to add it to Library and drop a review. :) My Webnovel name is Omnitheus.

                      Gaureeey

                      Thank you so much for the review., I'm also done with my review! You have an interesting story., Keep on writing., :)

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