Surbhi_mithil Hi! I'm going to be brutally honest but I'm sorry. I can't write you a review. I've tried rereading it multiple times since yesterday and can't move on from Chapter 1.
The first half is bearable but the second half felt like it's directly translated to English. I'm without a doubt, believe you have a nice story written in your mother tongue but I'm also certain it's the work of google translate that effed it up.
I would strongly suggest you to proofread and maybe use grammarly so your readers can enjoy your work.
Cheers! x

    _Rockbison_
    Sure dear, but I can't find your review in my reviews section maybe I delete it by accident.Its my humble request can you do it again. Chapter comment and paragraph comment too. I'll do the same. Let me know when you are done.

      Moonwriting hey l've done foing it...you can check.....
      Plzzz do chapter comment by reading the chapter from 10 to 15.....
      I'll be waiting for u....thank u ...

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