Nikkie_LZ ight i did the review, amazing work, my review has a spoiler mark on it so yeah, also, please just be the most honest with the review, its so i can improve my writing.

    Surbhi_mithil Hi! I'm going to be brutally honest but I'm sorry. I can't write you a review. I've tried rereading it multiple times since yesterday and can't move on from Chapter 1.
    The first half is bearable but the second half felt like it's directly translated to English. I'm without a doubt, believe you have a nice story written in your mother tongue but I'm also certain it's the work of google translate that effed it up.
    I would strongly suggest you to proofread and maybe use grammarly so your readers can enjoy your work.
    Cheers! x

      _Rockbison_
      Sure dear, but I can't find your review in my reviews section maybe I delete it by accident.Its my humble request can you do it again. Chapter comment and paragraph comment too. I'll do the same. Let me know when you are done.

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