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@Yosoya I left you a review and added to my library. I really enjoyed your 3 chapters. You really pass the test of the "how good are the descriptions" I always think of when I start a fantasy novel. The MC's curse really gave me a "fairy tale" vibe in a good way, it just felt authentically presented. One small error I noticed was at one point you used the word "unionism" when you meant "unison". Probably autocorrect, I think it was in Chapter 2. My story does not start out as fantasy, it arrives at a fantasy world by the end of the intro i've added so far. I won't be offended if it's too far off for you. Here it is: https://www.webnovel.com/book/god's-little-helpers_24072808906930305