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Been a few months since I started my story and I think it's coming along. Really appreciate if you check it out: it's funny.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/god's-little-helpers_24072808906930305
JustGoDie13
- Apr 7, 2023
- Joined Aug 17, 2022
Check out my story. If you leave a decently thoughtful review, hit me back and I'll respond within 24 hours. Thanks
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@CallieLy Just left a review, I enjoyed it so far! Mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/god's-little-helpers_24072808906930305
Happy to review trade. My story is here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/god's-little-helpers_24072808906930305
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@BLACK_LIGHT_ Thank you, will get you back before the end of today
Hi! I've left reviews for a lot of people on here but a few people haven't responded in turn. If you check out my story and leave a review, respond to this message and I'll do the same for you within 12 hours max. You can look at my comment history and see that I've never left anyone hanging
. I'm also happy to talk to you on discord if you want more detail.Thank you, please add to your library if you enjoy my story.
My story is here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/god's-little-helpers_24072808906930305
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@JWhite_9988 I just left you a review. If you want clarity on what I meant by breaking your paragraphs up I'm happy to elaborate, but otherwise I like the world that you have built and I added it to my library to continue reading. My story is here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/god's-little-helpers_24072808906930305
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LIGht_Pen I just saw, thank you! I promise to review yours before the end of tonight!
Rushakh lol. its weird, when I go to your account logged in I see it, and it shows up as the last thing I did in my moments even when I'm looking at my profile logged out.
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@Rushakh I see what you mean. I reposted it but I still see the same issue. If its still not showing tomorrow I will see if I can get help fixing. Sorry! No idea why its hidden. I also just double checked the people ive most recently left a review for, as recent as yesterday and those show without issue.
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@Rushakh Is it just blocked under a "spoiler" button? I did tag it that way since I think I mentioned the end of chap 16 specifically.
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RomanceFanatic028 I was about to say yes, then I was reading it, I realized I already did review it 7 days ago haha! Its on page 2 of reviews I think.
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@Rushakh Left you a review today! Happy to talk on discord if you want me to be more specific on what I said in my review. Enjoyed your story through 16 chapters. Mine is here:
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@Harem_Queen It's really not a huge issue, I saved the positive stuff for you review
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@Harem_Queen Left you a review just now. One thing I didn't mention in the review - there's a couple times in chapter 2 where the love interest's advances are compared to being like a webtoon or a romance manga. I love webtoons and romance manga's, but I'd be careful describing your own writing that way. I think it can fall into cliche fast, because your breaking the immersion of the reader a little bit. In my opinion its like, "well this is a romance webtoon essentially, so I expect stuff like this to happen anyway" I don't necessarily need to read the character feeling that way.
Feel free to disagree, it's my personal opinion so I didn't include it in the review. My story is here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/god's-little-helpers_24072808906930305- Edited
@Kefir4ek Left you a review just now
. My story is here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/god's-little-helpers_24072808906930305Anybody who reviews my story, I'll leave you a review before the end of this weekend (US EST time). Please remember to add to library if you enjoy it. Gonna have a new chapter out tomorrow
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https://www.webnovel.com/book/god's-little-helpers_24072808906930305My story doesn't meet your criteria unless BL counts for homoerotic bickering, but I can say its a bit different from a lot of the stories on this site: https://www.webnovel.com/book/god's-little-helpers_24072808906930305. Won't be offended if you ignore it, cheers!
Lordyyy
Left you a review! My story is here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/god's-little-helpers_24072808906930305- Edited
@maylily_jk left you a review
. My story is here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/god%27s-little-helpers_24072808906930305