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done dear, if you want chapter and paragraph comments let me know..
3 paragraph comment and 1 chapter comment
I have 6 Chapter so we can do it until 6 and further when I update or any time.
Are you interested...?
September 2021- Review Swap here!
Account_nolonger Thank you
Account_nolonger I have reviewed your writing. I do not know how to get a link but my novel is called Tangled Desires .
Frorstyflame Hey I will review your story. My story is called Tangled Desires.
Hey Guys, it's my first time writing a novel, Would really appreciate it to have feedback to improve.
I can also do a review swapped!
Here's my novel
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-mask-delivered-to-me_24273884205244105
Thanks guys.
Hi all!
I started writing a new story. The main part of the plot revolves around a girl, who, as it turns out after, is not quite a girl (read more for yourself).
Genres: fantasy; tags: isekai, cultivators, gender intrigue.
Well, are you interested? Then why are you still here, run to read!
https://m.webnovel.com/book/primal-loli-seven-seals_24156820905360205
Looking to review swap.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/in-harry-potter-as-the-dark-one_24255522805103805
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ZeroX0666 hey wanna do swap as well?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-mask-delivered-to-me_24273884205244105
hey wanna do a snap review 
here's my book: https://www.webnovel.com/book/devil’s-crypt_24174279505502705
Moonwriting will do it tomorrow
Frorstyflame
Sure dear.......
Bernice_Naidu okay, I'll check it out
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IT WAS WITH A sense of peace that he bid farewell to life and bid it a fond farewell. There was a moment of peace, but it lasted only for a moment.
Despite appearing to have kissed death on the cheek, he had somehow come back to life.
Despite the absurdity of the situation, it was still a reality, and he had no choice but to face it, that much was certain.
To face it, the reality of his situation, what he needed was power, the power to march ahead. To explore the cause of his return from the jaws of death.
This is the tale of a country boy, who got up from the dirty roadsides and sat on the riches of the World.
Mortal Dreams
Read the rest of the book. And find out what happens with Sagara later on:-
[(https://www.webnovel.com/book/mortal-dreams_24248356706339505/noise_65150404094117010)]
Moonwriting Oh yeah be honest about it, please. Criticize if you feel the need to.
@Moonwriting Man your book is a new genre for me. But I still tried to get into it. And it was a good read. For myself I felt the anger that coursed through the MC in the first chapter and the pain of the traitor. I'm going to seriously read it starting tomorrow. Currently, working on my own. But don't worry you gained yourself a new viewer.
"Ding!""New Accomplishment! You gained a new reader."