Violet_Ivory Tell me............ As a writer, why don't writers read? Huh? HUH? 😛
I specifically asked for a FIVE STAR review and got 4... But it's a nice one that I really like, so I thank you for it <3 I'll review yours right after I post two chapters, I'm almost done.

      MerrySweet I just can’t give 5 stars. I’d rather be completely honest, which I was. I can’t let myself give someone 5 stars and just call it a day. Cuz there are ways people can improve. No one has the perfect story, and that’s what makes things beautiful.

        MerrySweet anyways no yeah, I am dyslexic and mentally retarded. So I couldn’t read what you said

            @Violet_Ivory It did rub you the wrong way twice, didn't it? Sorry I didn't mean to be mean the second time.

            First of all, you’re very talented. If you learn how to go with the flow of this platform, you’ll make a name for yourself. But if you’re writing because it’s something you want to do as a hobby and not make money out of it, then by all means ignore the rest of this newsletter.
            -Revise your synopsis. Separate yourself as a writer from the synopsis of the story. Instead, add your thoughts in a review of your own story and what readers should expect, and give it 5 stars while you’re at it. It boosts confidence.
            -Change your cover into something anime, ML readers love to see anime girls, you don’t have the romance tag so maybe a powerful guy with blood stains, etc

            -Instead of notes in the chapter, keep them in the writer’s note dedicated place. Why? Why not?
            -Consider adding romance into your story and tagging it. Why? More readers.
            That was what I put together quickly for you, but if you have the patience to update 2 chaps a day for a long time (which you easily could since it’s an adventure) then you’ll make it big times in here.

              MerrySweet ye no it’s more of a hobby, but gahdayum does it feel all warm and fuzzy when someone reads your work and likes it. Like bro, you gon’ make me cry. The anime book cover thing is so tru tho lmfaooo.

              But like 2 chapters a day, you tryna kill me? HOLY what is this grind you’re on, mad respect if your standards and expectations are that high, but I can barely formulate 2 words together in a day.

              But like thanks for reading, your review made my day. If you decide to read another chapter, give me a comment to let me know you’re reading or whatever. I’ll give you a đŸȘ or something.

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