acebellrain So Okay, I've posted a positive review of your book on the official website, but I'd like to give my critical feedback here. Firstly, I think the cover is good, and I'd give it a 3.5 out of 5. However, I believe that adding some monsters and making it darker with elements of blood, and even adding a girl to it, would make it more catchy, especially for WN readers. While your cover is classy, I think you have the potential to make it more eye-catching.
Moving on to the synopsis, I think it's great and would give it a 5/5. Your writing style and grammar are awesome, and I'd rate it a 4.5/5. Lastly, the story, content, and plot are full of potential. You balanced emotions and thrills really well, and I loved the way you described Reimi's emotions. It made me feel concerned for her.
However, I think updating is an issue. It would be better if you updated the chapters weekly instead of monthly, as I prefer to read a chapter weekly. Overall, the story and description are outstanding, and I'm sorry if I came across as negative. I just wanted to express my honest thoughts. Keep up the good work!"