Hello everyone! after finding out that there is a thread for shameless promoting I decided to jump into this fire and offer up my own novel as a sacrifice to the gods of webnovel! Anythng would be appreciated especially an honest review since this is my first time writing!
Tags: ROMANCE ACTION ADVENTURE COMEDY WEAKTOSTRONG VIDEOGAME MMORPG ESPORTS
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    Check out the remake my first novel! 6chapters up! 20more in the bank! Leave a Like/Review/Add To Library/Comment etc etc Cheers!

    Synopsis:
    “My life on earth was just a Pre-Birth Simulation?!”

    "The Prince Who Conquered Time" follows the journey of a savant young prince who finds himself trapped in a futuristic sci-fi world full of cultivators. Facing higher powers unbeknownst to most, he is forced onto a path of accelerated human evolution stemming from extraterrestrial technology of ancient civilizations.

    Besides his photographic memory, his only hopes are the talents from his intriguing lineage and his maniacal obsession for power. Prince Chronos Astral must supersede his astounding potential and rise to power to protect the warmth of a family that he had never experienced and prevent the extinction of his planet.

    With it’s larger-than-life characters and genre-defying twists, this story pays homage to the science fiction and cultivation fiction novels millions have fallen in love with.

    The Prince Who Conquered Time
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    Quasy Hi I decided to have a read through all of your chapters available so far. I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed the story so far. It took me a little while to reply to you as I read through them all, so I pretty much dedicated my night to it. I'm going to be leaving you a review I thought it would only be right doing so, after I have read through all of your story like I have others. Plus it works out giving you a boost in the process.

    So to start off I will mention the things to focus on and then ill go into the amazing things your story holds. First off commas are your friend, they really help break up sentences allowing the reader to know when the pauses are. The next thing I would mention would be that you think about your story and its moving pieces really quickly ending up thinking faster then you can write it out. I would recommend just reading each chapter before release to make sure the flow of the chapter is there. That's just advice though, I tend to do that for my own work. However a different method might work better for you.

    The earlier chapters were really good at showing the impact the games launch had on the world I really enjoyed how that developed. The progression into the later chapters felt really cohesive and flowed well into one another. Reading this was quite natural in the way the plot unfolds.

    The way you write your characters is incredible, lots of depth and detail. Clearly showing their personalities traits and aspirations. Made them feel like real people. Further on this note I adore you let the npcs of the game world have the same level of sentience as the players. Gives it the charm overgeared had for its npcs. The teacher mentor dynamic was really well established, I really enjoyed seeing Saleen getting the recognition she deserves. Terminology used in lectures and describing fights is very good in my opinion. Also the way you play off of all of the characters showing their interactions with each other is done so well, making them feel really three dimensional. I have to say I love Mel and Bel probably my favorite characters so far really developed and full of life. Was really fun reading through the chapters their involved with. Cant wait to see the future plot points with them.

    The world building is excellent, you have a knack for planting unique seeds followed by great ideas and execution makes it a joy to guess what hint your showing will develop into. Loved the descriptions and names used for the setups of certain areas followed by their own unique ecosystem and functions. The world events are delivered really well, creating tension and forming stakes that make the overall reading process more enticing.

    Your protagonist is well developed with a clear thought in mind for how you want him to be. I like the how he's more of a study kid in comparison to most tropes out there. Allows for a more logical mindset on viewing the world. Which I clearly see viewing into your protagonists lens. His personality is well developed, allowing him to feel alive and his actions feel real for someone in his position. The uniqueness you've managed to imbue into him is really good, the powers he wields are very versatile allowing for a lot of creative freedom with it which you have already displayed. I like his thought out nature relying more on logic then emotion, focusing more on his own goals rather then the chaos of other peoples opinions. The weapons you've decided to give him are so creative in my opinion, I'm wondering if you were inspired by the trick tower scene in hunter hunter to pick those weapons.

    Overall, this story was very addictive to read. Great descriptions, incredible character writing and seamless flow between each chapter. With cliffhangers and plot seeds making me want to stay and read more. Safe to say this one was hard to drop. Ill be keeping up to date with your releases, cant wait for more of Wyatts adventures. If you would like to exchange ideas or would like more feedback or criticism add me on my writing discord if you like NocturnOwl#0230. Expect a review soon ;D

      I guess I should at least post this properly here.
      Book name: This Is The Fifth Time I Used This Love Story.
      Genre: should be Royal Romance, but none of the genres provided is suitable, so it's marked as fantasy romance.
      Tag: Royal family, forbidden love... Etc...

      Summary: is basically about a lady who got exiled from her empire and accidentally reached the territory of a neighbouring country and was brought back to the castle by the King of that kingdom.

      If you are one of those who got fed up with all those twisted romances with abusive love and domineering love, just like me, you may give this book a try. The update rate is one chapter per day, and depending on my mood, it might be two chapters a day sometimes.

      https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25784378805898405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4310706432

      Hello beautiful people.
      This grandma will participate in the shameless self promotion.

      SYNOPSIS;

      "We have travelled by wholly different paths, but eventually, we come to the same destination."

      In every life she lived, there was one similarity...

      World A; she stole the female lead's song during the competition in order to gain the empress' favor and win.

      The female read wrote an impromptu poem that stole the hearts of the empress dowager, the emperor, the crown prince and the masked general.

      World E; she dumped her poor bamboo horse for a rich second generation sunshine boy.

      The female lead picked him up and he became the feared mensao of the business world that cherished only the female lead to his grave.

      World Z; she, surprisingly, fairly beat the female lead in getting a highly coveted internship position with a genius scientist.

      The scientist dealt with some unstable substance that caused the zombie apocalypse. The result was that she was one of the first zombies.

      She was like a black hole that sucked in all the world's bad luck so that the female lead could shine brighter.

      Not surprisingly, the universe chose her to suffer again, allowing her to be reborn for all her lifetimes.

      (Her) low IQ supporting role; I will not let anything go.

      Random male character; is it not easier to lick my tofu? displays tofu

      Her; ???

      Thank you!!!!

      https://m.webnovel.com/book/25730831705715905/69437156996734291?from=detail

      Hello, everyone. I am currently working on a new novel. Please check it out.

      https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-horatius-era_25735615906984505

      Synopsis (Down Below) -

      The imminent expiration of a tyrannical figure. No one could have expected the sudden incident, whether it be those who support him or berate him.
      The return of the figure to a distant past filled with hardship? Many would be gloomy due to having to experience those dark times once again, but Alex Horatius was instead elated.

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        Hi everyone, I’m working on two WSA books, but kind of more leaning to continuing this one hehehe it’s called The Slumbering Underworld, set in an alternate world. It’s a fantasy romance with lots of magic/action/adventure/and some seggsy scenes if you know what I mean 😂😂

        Summary

        When Penelope wakes up on a throne in a stranger's arms, she struggles to grasp what happened and why there are gaps in her memory. Can this sexy-as-hell Abe be trusted? Why does she feel so alive when he touches her? Why are there people outside the throne room trying to destroy them?

        As Penelope and Abe navigate a world that neither remembers, they must find a way to retrieve their memories before further chaos takes place.

          once again here to sacrifice my novel to the gods of webnovel!
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/primal-online_25529472006430205
          any reviews, comments and or advice are greatly appreciated

          small summary: Since childhood Wyatt has always followed the advice of the adults around him. Study hard! get a good job! honestly not bad advice the problem is that's all he has ever done. Stuck in a daily mundane loop Wyatt struggled to latch onto any interests. That is until a new game called Primal Online comes out.

            For fans of fantasy, adventure and action in the world of dungeons and hunters, I invite you to follow a journey in the wonderful and terrifying world of fantasy In a story similar to his individual compromise.
            Its name is vision: Desire to level up
            Synopsis
            Awakened humans who have magical energy, super abilities, and various skills to hunt monsters inside the dungeon are called Hunters.
            My name is Kim Ji-hoon "Unawakened" I work as a porter with the hunters In one of the raids we found a hidden door containing a rare artifact When we entered and looked for it a very terrifying monster attacked us.
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