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eudine thanks a lot for the review. I've seen them. I was also more descriptive in the following chapters, but I will try to improve though.

Moonwriting You have yourself a deal then. I'll begin reading your story.

La_wyrd Keep it up, you’re doing great!

Zhoa_Fei
Okay thanks...

im up for review swap!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-path-of-destruction_26315158406967205

La_wyrd I will do yours too

Zhoa_Fei Can you do mine

DARK_DEKU Sure. If you're willing to read and review mine as well. Send me a link of your story

MayaKeiran

I'm working on it right now.

MayaKeiran

Just posted review. Sorry it took so long. I enjoyed your story. I'll definitely read more as time permits.

Rooxerer Heya, sure! I'll read and review it in a few hours.
My book: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-three-anomalies_25884591705262505

ZyRule Hey, I will review yours.
Please put an honest review for mine - https://www.webnovel.com/book/moonlit-identity_26163746606485205

Flattened_Rice_007 sure, il review yours after you did mine

ZyRule Reviewed yours. It is good.
But I would advise you to revisit the chapters again. The 'his' and 'her' are wrong there. In the first chapter, I thought the protagonist is male. Later in the second chapter found out it was female. The synopsis too tells us about a female vigilante.
Also, there is a bit of confusion about the protagonist's age in the first chapter.

Flattened_Rice_007 my bad, i just notice about it too, thanks for the notice on that, il review yours right away

Hey Little Devil Here! Anyone up for a review swap? My own is a cultivation novel. I'm not one for leaving comments as I tend to believe every author has their own way of writing and adding in details. However, if you request it, I will do so. My novel link is:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/heaven's-mercy_25810244005985305
Also no promises, but if I really like your novel and I have time, I might offer to help edit it.