https://www.webnovel.com/book/servant-of-greed_26393645405972605
In a world that is divided by the constant presence of night and day, a young boy from the dark side of the planet experiences a devastating event that shatters his world. In the midst of his grief and confusion, he forms an unlikely alliance with a powerful deity who emerges from the shadows. Together, they embark on a perilous journey to uncover the truth and restore the balance of the world.
September 2021- Review Swap here!
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GMSJakers I did yours a week ago but I think you missed my reply, here are my novels you can review anyone, & whoever else interested in review swap please add any of my novel and review, after reviewing please reply to my message with your link, then I'll add yours and will review ｡◕‿◕｡
From ordinary to extraordinary: the reincarnated billionaire
https://www.webnovel.com/book/from-ordinary-to-extraordinary-the-reincarnated-billionaire_26534860606656205
Hearts of Fortune: A billionaire's Obsession
https://www.webnovel.com/book/hearts-of-fortune-a-billionaire's-obsession_22230884906275805
Quantum Rift: Chronicles of the Multiverse
https://www.webnovel.com/book/quantum-rift-chronicles-of-the-multiverse_26569547406769205
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@Anya_Voss Are you considering a feedback exchange?
anyone wana swap reviews https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-fallen-princess-revenge_26532561006648605
Tifala Hello! Would you like to review swap? If so, here’s my link, please reply with your link if interested
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/26147833805198705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4318679159
eudine Done, a great story by the way
here is my link- https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-greatest-disciple-of-the-evil-sect_26093001406241805
shreya_ki Done, like the story so far, keep it up
here is my link- https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-greatest-disciple-of-the-evil-sect_26093001406241805
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@eudine I read it and left a review) You have a very interesting novel 
I recommend that you indicate the date and time not only in the title of the chapter, but also at the beginning of it.
My novel https://www.webnovel.com/book/23777892605101705/71229276392834754
anyone wana swap reviews https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-fallen-princess-revenge_26532561006648605
shreya_ki I did yours, it was pretty good from a story standpoint, but the writing quality could use work. Things like typos and conveying your message more smoothly. Here's mine. https://www.webnovel.com/book/fragility-surviving-a-society-that-only-values-strength_26365306006124105
DARK_DEKU I did yours, here's mine. Thanks. https://www.webnovel.com/book/fragility-surviving-a-society-that-only-values-strength_26365306006124105
Your dialogue was really stiff, instead of saying he said she said so much, try having that character perform an action before the dialogue, that makes it flow smoother. Keep it up.
Let's swap
Here's the link of my novel
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25399997106095105?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321560065
Season 1 complete
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Rishabh_sharma_RIS I read your novel and left a review. Work on displaying dialogue highlighting them, the thoughts of both the main character and secondary characters, and working out descriptions of the places where he is. And so you have an interesting story
My novel https://www.webnovel.com/book/23777892605101705
Anyone wanna review swap? Add it to your library:https://www.webnovel.com/book/thousand-bodies-demon-god_26504100905313205
sleepingpeacefully Hi I have done review on your story, let me know after you have done mine.