Bloom759 i read the first 3 chaps then skipped to the last. i imagined it as being set in a kdrama. if thought that way, the vividness is great. the only issue i have is that theres nothing that can make me stay after reading the first three chapters (i usually drop novels after that if i find it boring). the whole chapter about the AI feels like a filler that can actually be shown in three to five paragraphs.
what i want to say is: too much showing is also a bad thing. it becomes boring and feels like a drag to read. but also, i think your novel has potential. it just needs more chaps so goodluck!

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