Nr_Yet1208 mememmeeee!

https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-alpha's-beautiful-thorn_22452704105433505 I saw you like fantasy romance but the best I can offer is my new werewolf story hahaha, I am working on something else for the WPC contest and may post it later, but yeah feel free to choose whether you want to swap on this or my contemporary romance novel below (also an entry for the previous WPC)

https://www.webnovel.com/book/roomlife_22427716406392305

Thanks! I'm getting started on yours now :)

      hidingpanduh very interesting start. I was kind of laughing and fuming at the same time. Let's just say, after reading a certain sentence, I wanted to kill that guy myself XD. But too bad. Towards the last bit, you skipped ahead quite a bit. it works so I won't hold it against you (I did want to know more of his struggles as a kid with a stepmother but oh well). Maybe use (***) for skips? that would be nice. and the fact that he has to run to save his brother didn't quite feel explained. I'm like, 'why?'. Though I suppose you'll explain that later on.
      Anyway, good luck with your story.

          Hello This is new WN

          Luo Fan, he was the greatest Luo family's young master, and ruled over 100,500 clans, which were divided into 40,000 ancient families, 30,000 mythical beast families, 20,000 longevity families, 10,000 immortal families, 500 infinite families In The True Upper Realm.
          He is the most gifted. One day, he acquired the system of destiny through the most powerful creators and destroyers of each era. During the quest for a weapon, one of the ancient weapons that used to slash and destroy everything in the Lower Realm.

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          I am The Mightiest Of All

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/i-am-the-mightiest-of-all_22443927806563205

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          I am The Mightiest Of All

            Nr_Yet1208 Done. Mate, this hits really hard for me, specially with your style of texting (fantasy LN japanese style.) Even if I don't like fantasy genre except Overlord of Mushoku Tensei, big hopes you will succeed and won't drop it.

              Rayne_Rue Hey, read yours. Frankly, I think it's a good story. Though there were occasional errors. You were missing some punctuation here and there. Some formatting issue was also a thing. Maybe do an edit to at least the first two chapters? Since those are the most important ones for a reader.
              Anyway, I wish you good luck.

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