Nr_Yet1208 Thanks! Your honesty really impressed me. Yes, I'll review yours right away, too.
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Nr_Yet1208 Thanks, I've just completed reviewing! Well done on the novel so far, it gives me them chilllzzzz!!! Keep going!
hidingpanduh very interesting start. I was kind of laughing and fuming at the same time. Let's just say, after reading a certain sentence, I wanted to kill that guy myself XD. But too bad. Towards the last bit, you skipped ahead quite a bit. it works so I won't hold it against you (I did want to know more of his struggles as a kid with a stepmother but oh well). Maybe use (***) for skips? that would be nice. and the fact that he has to run to save his brother didn't quite feel explained. I'm like, 'why?'. Though I suppose you'll explain that later on.
Anyway, good luck with your story.
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Luo Fan, he was the greatest Luo family's young master, and ruled over 100,500 clans, which were divided into 40,000 ancient families, 30,000 mythical beast families, 20,000 longevity families, 10,000 immortal families, 500 infinite families In The True Upper Realm.
He is the most gifted. One day, he acquired the system of destiny through the most powerful creators and destroyers of each era. During the quest for a weapon, one of the ancient weapons that used to slash and destroy everything in the Lower Realm.
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Nr_Yet1208 Done. Mate, this hits really hard for me, specially with your style of texting (fantasy LN japanese style.) Even if I don't like fantasy genre except Overlord of Mushoku Tensei, big hopes you will succeed and won't drop it.
Nr_Yet1208 lets swap
Rayne_Rue Hey, read yours. Frankly, I think it's a good story. Though there were occasional errors. You were missing some punctuation here and there. Some formatting issue was also a thing. Maybe do an edit to at least the first two chapters? Since those are the most important ones for a reader.
Anyway, I wish you good luck.
Hamapo done yours!
Nr_Yet1208 do you fancy a review swap? Mine is: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-mafia-boss-and-his-lost-princess_22457437705459105
Reply with yours and I do it now :)
[unknown] done! I added it to my library as it liked it so much. I would just watch your sentence length as they can be too long. But, I think you actually have a very clever way of writing. Would you mind having a look at mine? Thanks 
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Hello Everyone! I'm up for a review swap! here's the link
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I hope you have fun reading my work! Thank you very much!
Kiao_Suvan I am up for it! I do it now :) Mine is : https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-mafia-boss-and-his-lost-princess_22457437705459105
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DaoistmzSEPF lol I already review your novel :D
I even added it to the library, you did a great job.
Kiao_Suvan realised that too! 
hidingpanduh I have done yours, would you mind reviewing mine? https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-mafia-boss-and-his-lost-princess_22457437705459105
[unknown] thanks! Will do yours by tonight, Im outside right now
DaoistmzSEPF finished!! <3 :)
hidingpanduh thank you so much :)
[unknown] I done a review on yours. I love the banter between the main characters and the use of elemental magic! Will you please review mine? Thanks https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-mafia-boss-and-his-lost-princess_22457437705459105
Stormzz done! Really liked the wittiness…can you please review mine? https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-mafia-boss-and-his-lost-princess_22457437705459105