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Good day, would you be interested in review-swapping with me? I see that you both have few chapters only so I can propose you to read it all and offer some criticism. Let me know! (link below)
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    ItsEllie You should give us a link to peek at it ~~
    The link you see here is yours       ^
    Here's mine
    I'll give yours a shot in a bit of time

      Looking for someone who is interested to do a proper comment swap as below,

      5 chapters
      3 paragraph comments
      1 chapter comment

      Will be ignoring those who have a history of giving generic ones.
      Let me know! Cheers!

        o/
        I've revamped my book so for those who've read it already, you can always re-review! It currently only has 2 chapters.
        https://www.webnovel.com/book/dark-utopia_22759395006338705

        If you haven't read it, please do, and i'll review yours. Please do give honest reviews. I will ofcourse give another review with anyone i've worked with before.

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          Synopsis

          At the final stage of the Sixth Trial, Azzim and his friends are trapped inside the Gatekeeper’s Lair. It’s the lair of The Great Urukhan, the final boss they need to kill to open the gate to the Seventh Trial Realm.

          For some reason, they need to get to the Seventh Trial Realm to clear all the trials as a requirement to reclaim their freedom. But things don’t go as their plans. The four of them got crushed by a Legendary Dragon.

          Even after Azzim successfully kills the boss, he and all of his team members are all in a dire condition, inflicted by the poisonous Nethertoxin.

          He manages to save his friend by taking them out through the gate. But Azzim were trapped with HP lower than 1 %.

          Just as he is about to die, the system gives him a favor, another chance with an unfavorable condition.

          Will he take the chance? But the real question is, can he clear the trial?

            Hi, I launched a new book and I would like to know if you could give me an honest opinion, apart from the synopsis that is a little corny and that it would improve I would like to know even about the book itself.
            If you help me I will tell you what I think about your stories too.
            The story is about a new virtual reality game.
            Here is the link:

            https://www.webnovel.com/book/mmorpg-evolution-a-new-game_24377548806285405

              f0011 Hi! I have left several paragraph comments and chapter comments on top of a review. Hope you'll return the favour and do the same for 2 chaps, thanks!

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