_Rockbison_ I've read and reviewed your story. Quite an interesting plot you got.
As promised, here is my constructive opinion of your book.
- If you need help with your grammar/spelling but don't know how to, try using Grammarly. It's free.
- Despite English not being your first language, I like your choice of words e.g taunting. It helps with the description.
- The story comes across as telling rather than showing. Nothing wrong with it if that's your style.
Cheers! x