For anyone interested I have two stories. My first story is the introduction into an Avatar: The Last Airbender fan spinoff. But if you have read the first one, then I'd love to get feedback on the second story which is a spinoff of the spinoff. The first one is "Avatar: Macai's Journey" but the second one is "Avatar: Lingering Tensions". The second one needs feedback more than the first.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/avatar-macai's-journey_18591839205245005
https://www.webnovel.com/book/avatar-lingering-tensions_23392624506469905

    Brian_Hanes_117 hey done.. l've just read ur one story as l had my exam today......But really like it ..And honestly couldn't read the whole just a few chapters...
    But l've added it to my library....
    And surely will review ur anotger book soon after atleast reading a few chapters of it...
    Thank u for ur reviee by the way..

      RomanceFanatic028 no l mean my latest chapter... Can u read it and do a chapter comment about how it is???

      I can also review ur latest chapters .... And let u know how it is.... Of u don't mind☺️

        Lily990 okay then l'll read to chapter 10 to 15 as l've read ur some chapters before....
        But will take 1 or 1.30 hrs as l'll read it and l am a slow reader.😅😅 And also have some work to do...
        But if u have any problem with it u can do that after l do it...
        Thank u my friend in advance ☺️☺️

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