Ash_khanal
To review,
I would appreciate "comments" when reading, these three chapters of my novel: GO HOME:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/go-home-at-pace-turtle_23822104806738905
A. Chapter 1: The receding of youth. (Taraon and Misha)
B. Chapter 2 Fate gives you a chance. (Misha and Saul)
B. Chapter 12: Misael and his paper boats. (Misha or Misael)
The novel that precedes this is called: "X-MONK Primate Apocalypse": Which is a war featuring characters with bipolar multiverses.
These characters return home in "GO Home", where there are two contrasting characters:
Taraon Saulo and Misha or Misael. They are children of different families but they will be the co-stars of this second novel: "Go Home" and in the third novel: "Academy" to complete a trilogy: they will be the protagonists.
I would appreciate comments that can generate new chapters.

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          Kritika_6345 hey l've reviewed ur story but l couldn't read the whole...sorry....
          But it is a very nice and fresh concept....
          But plzzz do seperate the dialogues and paragraph from each other and make the paragraphs a little bit small so that the read don't feel bore and also it will be more fun to read....
          https://m.webnovel.com/book/her-one-smile_23552320306522305

          By the way here is my link...hope u gonna read a few chapter before reviewing it as l want some specific detail on my story..... Thank u...☺️☺️☺️

              _planetofzombies hey l've reviewed ur story... As l was the first one to do so and that's why l didn't point out ur negetive side there....
              But here let me tell u that if u have given the chapters some nice and interesting name then readers will be more curious to read and also to know what gonna happened next.... So plzzz do give some nice and interesting names to ur chapters... Other then that everything is nice😉😉

              https://m.webnovel.com/book/her-one-smile_23552320306522305

              Bu the way here is my story... Hope u gonna read some chalters and will give me a proper review....thank u....

                  SaberKey I would be so glad if you can review my book titled addicted to you( dangerous love)

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