Someone willing to review swap a slow-paced Isekai story with contemporary fantasy setting?
The dialogs, details of the scenes unfolding, body languages being conveyed and et cetera may off-puts you with the ridiculous amounts of words per chapters.
Magic, Guns ands Swords are yet to be included.
Volume 1 is barely ending, at least 60-75 % progression, not including the planned side stories that focuses on both worlds where MC is living in or used to.
Planned to be a 20+ long Volume series novel, may take a break to learn drawing panels as to make this a temporary graphic novel in the near future.

Yet Another One : A Science-Fantasy Isekai

Please tell me your utmost, honest opinion on this as i aim to improve from your feedback and they support me along the way of storytelling.

When you want to give me a heads-up, you can either do that in the review section, comments or my Discord : Yetano#1604

    Hello. I just dropped the first chapter of my fantasy series, Under The Crimson Moonlight. The series is 3,923 words long so far. Are there any other fantasy authors interested in doing a review swap?
    https://www.webnovel.com/book/under-the-crimson-moonlight_23997169706323205

    Synopsis:
    In a world that suffers under the oppressive foot of an authoritarian theocratic government, a rebellion rages on. Myleth is a boy who has had many things taken away from him in life. After obtaining powerful magic abilities, Myleth’s ready to exact revenge on the man responsible. Myleth must go on a quest to steal all of the royal houses’ sigils so that he can take on God himself.

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