Shico_rai
Hello my name is Brandon gould I would like to do a review swap with you
I am aware of the grammer and spelling so there is no need to methin it
I would like to know if there is anything i can do to make my book better and any advice that would make me a better writer
my link and summory are below and my review will be up shortly
https://www.webnovel.com/book/arran-ember-the-last-of-the-dra'ghoul-bloodline_20065626606216405

850 years have passed since Zargorwarths defeat and the Vermillion Empires sudden surge in power over the Multiverse. Victor Silvertounge the last of the Guardians of Light, stood overseeing the balance to ensure that it did not fall into the darkness.
Victor could feel a change coming soon, the balance had been shifting and he did not know why but could sense that a Dra’ghoul was about to be born the first one since Draco Dra’ghoul
Emma Silvertounge a Syeer far stronger than any other seen before while only at the young age of sixteen walked pieces of her crimson hair fell in front of her sea-blue eyes and her freckled checks
“ Father, Who is Lupine Riddle ?” She asked Victor froze all time stood still, “ My child. Who told you about him? Victor said slowly his voice trembling with fear
Emma replied “ No one I had a dream and his name popped into my head as did Angel born and Wolfkin. What do they mean?”
Victor did not respond for a moment “ Tell me Emma did you see a Sword of Crimson Fire, a Spear of Golden Light, and an Ax with a wolf's head engraved on the hilt?”
She nodded slowly Victor sighed “ I feared as much. One last question was there a child with a dragon tattoo on his right arm?”
Emma nodded Victor refined from cursing “ my child it would seem that you are somehow linked with this new Dra’ghoul and those you saw in your vision. Do you know where he will be born?”
Emma replied, “ Haven Valley his mother Ashi Ember was just pronounced pregnant.”
Victor picked up his staff and said “ good then we will go and live in Haven Valley post haste.” Emma replied, “ but what about the balance?” Victor paused and said “ There is nothing I can do to prevent what will happen. The Balance will fall to darkness if I am here or not.
Victor turned to Emma who was looking out at the ever-expanding Space-Time Contium the images of her vision burned into her mind never to leave.
Victor placed a hand on her shoulder "We must leave post-haste the sooner we can get to the mother the better."

Emma nodded before they left she went and packed a medium sized bag with cloths, a leather bond book named Tales of Tylingariea by Damion Vixen Dorima and secered a silver blaclet onto her right wrist with a loud click the braclet clamped around her wrist buzzing and turning a dark blue..


she picked up her bag and meet Victer in front of a massive green portal that lead to the Haven. Taking one last look back at the Bridge of Reality Emma walked into the portal and the Wheels of Destiny for her and others were set into motion

      Hello all Restful Sins here and I want to review swap on all sorts of books. I mainly read cultivation and fantasy but I like trying new ones as well. I just ask if you read my book let me know some stuff that could be changed to be more reader friendly.
      https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17238394906135805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4306161833
      Join Ezekiel keeper in a world were magic lives and the land runs red with blood. Follow him on his journey of power to protect what he loves.will he be able to become stronger than the force that drives him? Or will he fall into the abyss of hate and despair

      Anotoki I saw you asked me before, and I apologize for not responding! I'm fine with swapping! 😄 I'll read yours over the weekend as I still have a couple swaps to do. You can pick either of mine:
      See You in Sunny Dreams (yuri/fantasy) - https://www.webnovel.com/book/see-you-in-sunny-dreams-%5Bwlw-nblm%5D_20784894105742205
      My Ghostess' Will (yuri/supernatural) - https://www.webnovel.com/book/my-ghostess'-will-%5Bgl%5D_21151921706580505

          Hello, "Lost in Time; Battlefront," is the first novel I've ever posted on this or any site/app. If you have time please feel free to check it out, add to your collection, comment, or even rate the story. Any feedback is appreciated. Thank you in advance :)

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          There is "gore, bloody, violent," content throughout the story that may bother or not be suitable for some readers. As well as some crude language and other adult themes here and there.

          There will be suspense, adventure, action, and fantasy elements mixed in. This story takes place in modern/slightly futuristic times; and somewhat alternate reality/universe. Most of the main characters will be between the age of 17 and 32, with a few exceptions.

          The first volume is complete, with 60 chapters. Volume 2 will start again consistently in June. (I have a new job that takes most my time but I will post soon.) I am working on a "novel" that has "extras" for this main novel and will update there often. I will be catching up to the end of Volume 1 on the side stories then will start Volume 2. (You can check it out with this link or find it on my page/account.) https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/18033722305017705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4306948962

          Please check it out and let me know what you think. If you are kind enough to leave me an honest review or even just a comment with your thoughts, I will return the favor. Be safe and take care.

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