@"Clorox_Bleach_8533"#p568135https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/23722274906834405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4315396230
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    @"Rayne_Rue"#p568103https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/23722274906834405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4315396230
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      Clorox_Bleach_8533 You asked for an honest review and I gave you one. I believe I was being honest with you. So next time you review on someone's book because you were mad or something remembers you can also not review someone if it's goo g to be an insult to the writer. It's okay to point out a mistake like every reader had and there have only been two. You didn't read my book. You can criticise my book but don't criticize me as a writer.

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          zigginah You wrote that you wanted feedback and criticism on this forum. I gave you just that, there is no anger from my end. If you dont like criticism next time say that you want a fake review. I'm just being real and trying to tell you what's wrong with your story and how to improve it. Again, no hate.

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