Hi, I launched a new book and I would like to know if you could give me an honest opinion, apart from the synopsis that is a little corny and that it would improve I would like to know even about the book itself.
If you help me I will tell you what I think about your stories too.
The story is about a new virtual reality game.
Here is the link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/mmorpg-evolution-a-new-game_24377548806285405
Anyone for a review exchange with a novice writer all accepted
The link is:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/mmorpg-evolution-a-new-game_24377548806285405
f0011 Hi! I have left several paragraph comments and chapter comments on top of a review. Hope you'll return the favour and do the same for 2 chaps, thanks!
PerkyPompous_Pixie
sure send me your link so we can swap. Here is mine
https://www.webnovel.com/book/tenth-author's-journal_24226431006174105
https://www.webnovel.com/book/falling-for-his-prisoner_23656071806262805
5 chapters,
3 paragraph comments
1 chapter comment
PerkyPompous_Pixie
I am done.
Willhem_Duy ditto!
Please I need a review on my book
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24038434306665805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321700940
Does anyone want to swap honest reviews and comments?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/let-me-regress_24052754506771605#review
Withe_Reaper I am in, here is my link
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/23574103205401505
daniz_ I am in, here is my link
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/23574103205401505
Joy_Michael_ I am in, here is my link
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/23574103205401505
itsmeagain05 hey lets do this but as u said urself that u gonna read the story before reviewing it so lets do paragraph comments as well... Also lets do collection swap... I hope it will be okay with u
I've reviewed it and it's good we'll done. Keep it up
f0011 , ItsEllie , I'd be glad to have to feedback
Nocturnis6, I do acknowledge you'll have a lot of work since you've asked so many people for a swap.
Withe_Reaper I'll give it a shot ! c: Here's mine.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/why-i-(don't)-regret-looking-for-the-dragon's-eyes_23341339006198405
