McWms99 Happy New Year. I will like to ask if you can review my first chapters. I took your advice on breaking up the first few chapters, and I've decided to edit the entire book. If you still have any complaints, please critisize me on them. If you can't do this, that's fine also. Thank you.

    Good Evening, who's up for a review? Here's mine...
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