AceAmbrosia Hey Ace, I have recently left a review of your story, but I would like to provide some critical feedback here so that I can share how I believe you can improve your book. To be honest, I didn't enjoy the first chapter much as it described events that I was not familiar with, and I initially felt that the book wasn't worth reading. However, from the first paragraph of the second chapter, I was completely hooked. The character development and story were both interesting to me from that point on.
I would suggest working on Alex's thoughts and feelings a bit more and going into detail, such as when he first realized he had the opportunity to save his father. Adding details like his thoughts of being able to save him, feeling joy and hope, and then suddenly experiencing despair and hopelessness will create a powerful and impactful scene. This is just my opinion, but perhaps you could make the second chapter the first one somehow, as webnovel readers want something that grabs their attention.
Overall, these are just suggestions, and you know better than me what works best for your book. Best of luck, and please keep me updated.