RomanceFanatic028
Just finished reading the initial chapters, along with the review I have also done some comments and provided suggestions for improving. Added to collections as well.
Will be awaiting the same from you.

    cursedravenx btw I am done with your review. You should edit some sentences. There are grammatical errors. I can tell but my paragraph comment is not working.

      Ok and btw are you interested in contracts from webnovel.

        RomanceFanatic028
        I have pointed out grammatical mistakes in 4-5 paragraph comments, please check them.
        Btw you are repeating the same mistake I have pointed out in your book. You have a habit of using verbs in past tense with 'didn't'.
        Hopefully that helps.

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