shreya_ki I did yours, it was pretty good from a story standpoint, but the writing quality could use work. Things like typos and conveying your message more smoothly. Here's mine. https://www.webnovel.com/book/fragility-surviving-a-society-that-only-values-strength_26365306006124105
September 2021- Review Swap here!
DARK_DEKU I did yours, here's mine. Thanks. https://www.webnovel.com/book/fragility-surviving-a-society-that-only-values-strength_26365306006124105
Your dialogue was really stiff, instead of saying he said she said so much, try having that character perform an action before the dialogue, that makes it flow smoother. Keep it up.
Let's swap
Here's the link of my novel
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25399997106095105?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4321560065
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Rishabh_sharma_RIS I read your novel and left a review. Work on displaying dialogue highlighting them, the thoughts of both the main character and secondary characters, and working out descriptions of the places where he is. And so you have an interesting story
My novel https://www.webnovel.com/book/23777892605101705
Anyone wanna review swap? Add it to your library:https://www.webnovel.com/book/thousand-bodies-demon-god_26504100905313205
sleepingpeacefully Hi I have done review on your story, let me know after you have done mine.
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@sleepingpeacefully I read your novel, left a review) Write a review about my novel? https://www.webnovel.com/book/23777892605101705
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GMSJakers
I've read it yesterday and enjoyed it, honestly an amazing story that appealed to me effortlessly.
Keep writing! even though I can't read past the 20s haha.
Here's my novel, a bit lengthy so you can drop it if you want, just make sure to tell me:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/echoes-of-rebirth-a-second-chance_26509657906572305
Is anyone up for a review swap? Please read at least the first three chapters and give me an honest review . They are very short chapters, though. https://www.webnovel.com/book/diva-la-vida_26553042305473505
Loctovia
Done, the story is so good! keep updating it please!
Here's my story, it might be lengthy for you so don't force it, just make sure to tell me:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/echoes-of-rebirth-a-second-chance_26509657906572305
Hello, I'm Ericka. I'm a new writer on this Webnovel, and really need support from all of you. Can you please read my story?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-little-wife-of-the-debt-redeemer_25761734906064605
@ryosososo Done reviewing yours, here mine https://www.webnovel.com/book/thousand-bodies-demon-god_26504100905313205