Tifala

Tifala I just think there's something wrong with the story and i can't bring myself to continue before fixing it.
Btw, do you need honest reviews?

    ricebucket0_0 You have a good romance, but you've only focused on the characters and how they interact. You need a couple of chapters to describe the world and for starters, it's better to have a conflict of magicians, since at the beginning of the novel it is said that there are approved magicians and there are condemned ones. Werewolves are also best represented more broadly, as well as the magical aspect.

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