VRW1
Hey, I have reviewed your novel.
Amazing story.
It's just that the starting part was really cryptic and combined with the grammar errors it was really hard to understand what was going on.
My review might be a little harsh so can delete it if you want and I will put a nicer review instead.
Other than that thanks for the fun read.
Also since you are a souls fan, you probably recognized the mask from my cover. (Its the manikin mask that was in the trailer for souls 2, but it got cut later)