Hello, I am new here but I am genuinely looking for constructive feedback from great readers who can give me some pointers and help me correct any mistake.
This is my story, it's 4 chapters till now and still in the making so I appreciate your honesty
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/24288171806617705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4317009531
If you like crime, romance, and twists, this is the book for you.
When a young girl runs into Canada's most wanted criminal things take an unexpected turn in her life. Find out her journey in the criminal who stole my heart.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-criminal-who-stole-my-heart_19724239005052505
What if one day our Mr. Regressor suddenly regressed like usual, only to find that his past was not how it had been in the countless times that he had regressed?!
What if someone, a person with not much role in his life and his future, suddenly turned into a whole different person?
Will our regressor who only seeks peace and food manage to find out exactly what is happening to his life?
Hi, my name is Jeffrey Robert Palin Jr., Check out my novel. Please tell me what you think. Be brutally honest, I need the critiques.
The story is a Fiction titled Cyber-multiverse Milieu .
It is Fantasy and Science Fiction.
The story begins after the chapter called Author’s Notes. The Author’s Notes chapter is not necessary to read but I think it might help.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/cyber-multiverse-milieu_24313933005512405
UpSide I will do as you wish, and I hope you can do the same with mine.
It's historical realistic story based on some real story but will be different from the known version.
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UpSide hi, Jeffery
I've read a couple of chapters of your book and the idea is really new to me. Never saw this idea before. Thus I'd like to ask If I can have a discussion with you about it.
Is there any portal, space, I can talk to you about your book?
UpSide You should go to the Review Swapping thread on the forum
I'll look at it and give some feedback too
A teenage girl got hit by a truck and was reincarnated into another world – a world of swords, magic, and dragons.
Her new life starts off as quiet and cold. But after a certain prophecy and the death of her newfound brother, things take a bit of a turn when she's forced to masquerade as him.
"Come year of 184,
A deer and a lion
Heirs of white and black coats
Will either destroy
Or unite the world."
#isekai #reincarnation #crossdressing #tragedy #dark #royalfamily #twisted
Sal_TarLeen I have whatsapp, kik app, and telegram. I can give you my User Name if you’d like. If you prefer a different app or portal, let me know. I’ve never really chatted about my book with anyone before. Should be interesting.
Sal_TarLeen are you looking for a proofread or an honest review? i can do either for you if you give my book a collection.
hello everyone please check out my book Demonic Soverign i promise you'll like it
glass_explosions please check out my book Demonic Soverign i promise you'll like it i'll also give your book a collection
Spacee Alright, sure 
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Spacee By the way, soverign is spelled sovereign.
glass_explosions
An honest review is what I want 
Spacee I liked it! A very good story, but you could work on those run-on sentences and punctuations.
Check out my novel called Karmic Devourer!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/karmic-devourer_24343982706025705
Sal_TarLeen Done! Now give me that collection >: )
