Starting out a new book, a fantasy story, I'd appreciate a review and comment. I'd give you book one in return.

https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/25799075706197705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4310924631

The world was destroyed. The war happened out of nowhere, creatures no different from us invaded our world and peace was lost.

The strong ones fell first, and the weaker ones could only take up their arms to fight. I was among the weak ones, caught in a battle among gods, an ant like died from the shockwaves. And so my story ended, or so I thought, I went back in time to my childhood.

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It wasn't supposed to be this way, this wasn't how the novel goes, where did all these portals come from, they weren't in the novel. Oh my god, what am I going to do?

A novel transmigrator breezes through life in a new world only she discovers not everything went according to the book she read. She makes an effort to fix the mistakes and return the world to order, but it's too late. She can only put her hopes on him.

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SYSTEM NOTICE

You're fucked.

He could only stare at the cheeky system in shock, looking around at the chaos and destruction around, maybe it was right. Maybe he was fucked.

SYSTEM: THERE IS A WAY TO FIX EVERYTHING.

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Everything she knew and loved was gone, she never wanted the destruction of the world, but she couldn't help it. This was her curse, hers and her people.

She gazed upon the weak one that watched their battle and raised her hands in one last prayer. To fix things.

What happens when the a transmigrator meets the original protagonist, when a regressor meets the final boss?

    Title: I woke up with a Dating Sim Choice System

    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/i-woke-up-with-a-dating-sim-choice-system_25939892106688105

    Genres: Magical Realism/Urban (Male lead)

    Synopsis: Will wakes up one day with a Dating Sim Choice System that's sole goal is to help him achieve his happy ending, but the only problem is that the system has a personality that would even put the Devil to shame.

    Follow the story of Will as he tries to navigate the thing called 'Love' while being forced to make choices that could turn his life upside down.

    ** Please note: I would love to hear your honest thoughts on my novel, any input can be helpful **

      Good day fellow writers and authors!

      I have created an account on Webnovel very recently and published six chapters of an ongoing book today.

      Please read and drop your reviews to my book here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/magus-of-azure-light_26000555305642705

      Title : Magus of Azure Light

      Synopsis:

      As Roseller Estrella has gotten deeper into the life of being a mystic and has progressed to higher magus ranks, he then began to face a conundrum in connection with his soul mate and his life as a mage.

      Roseller has desired for longevity. As a mage, his lifespan is projected to be longer than other human beings.

      He wants to become an immortal and to travel in many realms. But he wants to experience his planned journeys with his soul mate. Other than that, it would be pointless for him.

      Should he sacrifice his desire for immortality so he could live and die together with a mortal soul mate or would he eventually persuade his lover to be his mystic companion?

      Or what if Roseller could capture the soul of his mortal lover upon his death?

      His plan even included leading his lover's soul to reincarnation in the realm of immortals.

      Despite his clairvoyant ability, Roseller could not predict all things especially if fate would want to intervene.

      In a sudden twist of fate, Roseller learns that his lover, Justin Roque, is infected by a shapeshifter. Despite his attempts to suppress the spirit entity that can turn his lover into a shapeshifter, he can't stop what fate has already written for his lover.

      Should he be happy that his lover becomes a shapeshifter, making him an immortal?

      This is Book 1 of Azure Magus Immortal Series

      Author's note:

      I have integrated mages, werewolves, gods, goddesses, immortals and mythical beings into the storyline.

      As the story progresses, the main character will take possession of a Divine System. Though this is a fantasy genre, I would want to portray logical approaches to the existence of the system and the progress of the main character as a mystic cultivator in the mage/mystic classification rather than instantaneously exposing the System, which could leave the readers confused as to its origin.

      I am working on the daily update for the story and I am also working on another story to be included in the WebSpirity Award, so I urge you to read this. Thank you!

        I will not be verbose, my only request is that you read the first three chapters of my novel and then have a review. Describe what moments you liked and what you didn't. Also, rate the grammar.
        In turn, I will do the same with your work.

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