Can someone read and review the story idea?

Have you heard about transmigration? Most probably you have, but how dreadful if incomplete transmigration happens!

The future red rays reconverted 18 years old boy into a newly born baby. Unfortunately, his right hand remained unconverted. He gained some secret superpowers through rays, including mind-reading and invisibility (only with drink lies underground coal fire). He was considered abnormal in the whole world due to his large-sized hand. The future scientist wanted to snatch his powers and attack the whole world. He did conspiracies with Aliens. The affected boy wanted to take from his culprits, but his intention changed the whole world's direction.

Can I attract millions of audience with this idea?

Ok, now reading this was a ride.

A story about a big handy mind-reading invisible baby, could work, I would definitely be interested in reading it.

Also, in general, any story idea can work, you just gotta figure what it's working toward. Or, putting it in a simpler way, what is the point of it.

Like, what tone are you going for this? Is this gonna be a comedy parodying transmigration? Are you gonna play it straight? Like with a "serious" tone? I mean by that, focusing on action, adventure, and characters.

Figuring out those more basic and essential questions will tell if the story is worth writing or not.

    Vam_V Thanks a lot for your valuable suggestion. I have used serious tone. The boy wanted to take revenge from his criminals using his powers.

    At the end he would be shocked to know who was the criminal. The time travel disturbed everything unable to be accepted.
    Can't expose how because it will lose your suspense for the upcoming events in the story.

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