Imaglyy yes it is, but it can be fixed by defining form of something as training,
for example try to define fruits, tree, then people by relating them to something or focus defining their specific trait that you wanted like this =
~APPEARANCE
Zelda is a young woman with long blonde hair and blue eyes. She wears white armor and has a wing-shaped hair pin on the left side of her head.
~PERSONALITY
She possesses a serious personality and is a hard worker. She can't stand having her efforts in strengthening being made light of.
~DESCRIBE ACT
Continuing to avoid her slashing, I chose the right time and kicked the hand that was holding the sword, causing her to lose it.
of course these are for action novel not drama thou I can give one if you want but it will take time cause I can't describe drama well
Failure are rubble and trunk of tree which you stack to reach your goal!
~~~~Don't be afraid nor shamed, keep trying no matter how low your position are