This is my first book, looking for some constructive criticism. Please take a look, guys.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/angry-princess-a-war-between-love-and-power_20940186505194305
Thanks in advance.
Shameless promotion thread
Law of Cultivation: acquire and retain resources.
To acquire resources: plunder and pillage.
To retain resources: Leave none Alive.
In Semeria, the war for cultivation resources is as old as time and as constant as the rising and of the sun. Even in the Abandoned Region, where the energy was so poor and polluted that one wouldn’t send their worst enemy there, had an endless conflict. Humans had been living in this nightmare made a reality, fighting over what anyone else on the continent would consider crumbs.
Enter Xasha, husband, father, patriarch, Genius, artificer, creationist, and leader of the Falling Stardust Trading Company learns the truth from remnant souls on a journey. Having learned they had been living like frogs in a well. Humanity united under Xasha’s rule and sets off. Determined to rise from their standing and one day rule the entire continent.
Xasha soon realizes their combined power was the weakest on the continent and to become stronger, they needed better resources. But all the lands had masters and all the resources had owners. He had to join the war, annex, plunder, pillage, and protect. Thus, the Laws of cultivation.
link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/falling-stardust_21214204905613405
I guess there's no October shameless promo thread ... ggwp. Shameless Promo here then...
Need to vent? Want to find faults with a novel? Just want to spam for EXP? Can't resist giving bad reviews? Well, you can come and Let It Out here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/let-it-out_20867520306898605
7 days later
Please review my novel and I will do the same for you!
My book is Harry Potter: Back To The Future
https://www.webnovel.com/book/harry-potter-back-to-the-future_21423539205220205
Stabs you with a spork
Seriously, tagging everyone in a thread to promote your fanfic?
There's shameless then there's being an asshole.
Congrats, yer an asshole.
Title: A legal affair
I've been waiting for the October thread but have decided not to wait any longer. So here's my book!
Genre: Realistic fiction, suspense, intrigue, thriller, legal, crime, murder mystery, action, Australian indie award winner
Author: Alana Woods, the Intrigue Queen of thriller fiction
Author information: A career writer and editor in the English language. If you are after quality-written English language suspenseful stories you would have to go a long way to find better than this.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-legal-affair_20446038106533505
Synopsis: What would happen, do you think, to a lawyer who flouts the law to represent a client?
Newly arrived in Canberra, Australia's iconic bush capital, Elisabeth Sharman, senior legal officer, is thrown off-balance when the first case she's assigned is the defence of a 19-year-old youth accused of murder who is pleading amnesia.
How do you defend someone who can't defend himself? It's a problem Elisabeth goes way beyond the normal call of duty to find out.
But how do you distract your talented, very competent, and very attractive colleague so he doesn't stop you?
By appealing to his ego, of course.
Robert Murphy, Murph to his mates, admires Elisabeth's legal skills, and given she's gorgeous is more than willing to be seduced, but can't silence the questions reverberating in his head: Why is she doing this? Is she using me? Why am I letting her?
As they delve deeper into the murder victim's past, uncovering a love affair spanning decades of deceit and domestic abuse, Elisabeth's subterfuge binds Robert closer and closer until all he wants is her heart.
Does Elisabeth survive the trauma this case brings? Does Robert win or lose her? Neither question is answered until the very end.
A 126,000 word intrigue suspense legal thriller by Australian author Alana Woods, the Intrigue Queen of thriller fiction.
Half of the month is gone so by now it seems that there will be no October promotion thread. So here I go.
Title: The Enigma of the V
Synopsis: You think you have it rough? Jonas hears voices all the time. Sometimes he can't tell the real ones from his delusions appart. But ending up in another dimension and being trapped in the body of a 10 year old kid with a talking pigeon next to him made him freak out. He's now in a place called the Arkana, which unlike Earth is filled with magic and mystical creatures.
Join Jonas as he becomes Legend, meets new friends and uncovers a sinister conspiracy to destroy the Arkana. It's going to be a really crazy adventure!
https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-enigma-of-the-v_17948812406816005
Shameless Promotion and Review Swap. If anyone is interested, let's do it.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-devil's-harem_21431884606483305
Quick question how do I show an image of my novel on this forum?
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Scarlet5ky I think you should post this in the 'shameless review swap thread' but I've already added it to my library. I'm going to review it later when I'm done here in the forum.
Here's mine
http://wbnv.in/a/91gPKd7
The_Lonely_Guy
I think you should post this in the 'shameless review swap thread' but I've already added it to my library. I'm going to review it later when I'm done here in the forum.
Here's mine
http://wbnv.in/a/91gPKd7
@Grand_Void_Daoist
Where are you, man. It's a f....g mess here, everywhere. Are you ok?
Jahy ohk! Done!
This Is Where I Want To Be is a love story. It’s not your normal one-on-one person genre. Juliet is a feisty down to earth female lead that has one outlook on life. To love what is good for her and to give all of herself to whoever wants to be a part of her life. She has enemies and she has lovers. Plural. It’s not a triangle but rather a reverse harem. Everybody is committed to the unity of family and unconditional love. The supernatural aspect comes in that the origin of the creatures on earth is alien-based including vampires, werewolves, and others. They will be traveling to space.
There will be a lot of fighting, physically and emotionally, for what Juliet wants. Yes, she will suffer and they will all have a tough time getting used to the fact that there are multiple men in her life. But the conflict is from outside and not between the main characters. I don’t know how long this story will be, but the goal is for Juliet to rule the galaxy of the three worlds. And earth.
Of course what else.
If you're into dystopian realism, check my book out. UPDATED WEEKLY:
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/above-man_20803591406160905
Title: Above Man
Genre: Dystopian, Scifi, Adventure
Synopsis:
A successional Supreme Leader's unrelenting quest for happiness and fulfillment is dismayed by his fear of mortality which leads him on a quest for immortality.
18 days later
Well im dropping mine too then♡
Synopsis;
Year 2563
the young Reverie lived a life full of sorrow, pain, loneliness and broken trust.
One day on her way to college, her life changes drastically with a certain incident and makes a fateful encounter.
The mysterious Vincent who seems to know things that he shouldn't while having a grudge against her and aims for her life.
While they both go their ways in this apocalyptic world and travel through time and dimensions, the secret of the past come to the surface more and more.
Will they both end up at a mutual understanding or will they stay forever enemies?
a dramatic, dark ,psychological fantasy story with many fights and emotions. Dive into the depths of the abyss with Reverie and find the truth about the past and why Vincent wants her death.
I Update chapters daily and hope you enjoy!
feel free to lmk what you think!>~<
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/21603224805775605?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4319062273
4 days later
I think you would like this
Title: The Elusive Book Keeper
Genre: Urban Fantasy, Psychogical, Mystery
Synopsis; The creature chuckled, his voice echoing within the empty walls.
"What do you wish for? Youth, Immortality, Wealth, Power? You can be the one above all, I can make you Heaven's favoured child."
His voice was bewitching, tempting one to the depths of hell..........
Zane looked up, his eyes spoke of deep and suffocating emotions, "I will rather the heavens forget me instead."
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17707119706580305?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4313215511
11 days later
Hello there, I am writing a comedy, action, Adventure novel and will love some support. If y'all wanna do a swap review, I am also interested
https://m.webnovel.com/book/dimensional-overhaul_21338724006221005
The_Lonely_Guy Iam interested this is my novel.I will leave a review after reading.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/dimensional-overhaul_21338724006221005
Darth_Xiane haha, that's a burn
4 months later
Shameless promo here!!
I present to you He'sTheOne
I originally posted it a few years ago, and it got a good response but I took it down to revise it and now i have to start over so any and all love would be fantastic!
Synopsis: Kaia Crestfall is the youngest CEO of Crestfall Industries, a leading business in the entertainment world. But despite being capable of such a high position, she still needs to constantly watch her back. Especially with a fiance who has ulterior motives…
One day, after calling her mom to call off the engagement for the umpteenth time, she almost gets run over by a car. Narrowly escaping death, she is pulled into the arms of the last person she expected to meet. The one person who had broken her heart...the one person who will brighten her world...the one person she should never be with… Why? Because he’s her enemy. But for some reason, while she is stunned by the man in front of her, he tells her, “Marry me…”
End: Cliche synopsis plot (only as a set-up for the rest of the story!!!)
Start: The storyline after they get together
Despite many hidden secrets along the way, the secret relationship between her and the love of her life—Alexander Sabor—continues to grow. But as fate may have it, due to a dangerous man playing a dirty trick behind the scenes she is once again torn away from Alex. This time not of a broken heart from betrayal, but one of love and endurance.
As you read, get ready for some cute and heartwarming, as well as some heartbreaking scenes. But a good story will always have its heart-wrenching twists and turns!!
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Title: Unordinary Magus
Synopsis: On the night of the lunar eclipse in the year 2072, two identical twins were born to a pair of rich Mages, 2 little boys named Peter and Noah Magtris entered into the world of Magic and beasts...
Whilst Noah, the older of the two had an incomparable aptitude with Magic and had even awakened his mana core at the age of 5, his brother - Peter - was not so fortunate. Not only was he born blind but experts even stated he wouldn’t even be able to use mana ever in his life as his meridians were damaged.
This led to the 2 rich mages investing all of their resources into the once in a lifetime prodigy: Noah, leaving Peter with nothing.
Noah and Peter were inseparable, even though Peter’s parents always excluded him due to his unfortunate situation, his brother always treated him well.
However, things didn’t look good for the Magtris Family as at the age of 10, their prodigal son, Noah had suddenly fallen ill to an incurable disease and had died a couple of days later.
“Don’t worry brother, I’ll always be by your side…”
Those were Noah’s last words to his weak little brother, before he passed away. This sudden occurrence caused the Magtris Family to move into chaos. The rich couple ended up fighting, blaming each other for the loss of their Prodigious son and at the end they even divorced, leaving Peter to suffer the consequences.
A couple months later, Peter's father had become engaged to another woman who had 2 sons and a small daughter, making Peter’s life even more of a hell than it already was…
Join Peter’s perilous journey in a world full of mystery and Magic and watch as he overcomes countless dangers and hurdles. Is Peter really cursed by God? Or is his situation a blessing in disguise?
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/unordinary-magus_22905265405782005
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Please do check it out as it's an WPC entry. Kindly, donate any spare power stones or simply add it to your collections. Will be much appreciated...
6 months later
Hi! Hope you check out my story Mirrored Souls!
I just participated in the WPC - Female Lead - Secret Identity.
I need power stones to advance.
I can do a review swap and also collection swap.
But I really need power stones to win the competition.
Do check out my book.
[WPC#328 entry]
In the beginning, I was just a normal guy but with rare features. An albino with red eyes. However that was not the real reason for me to become their ‘Subject’.
It’s like what they said, fate is the one at fault for bringing me in this situation. And because of fate itself, my life has changed forever.
‘A pure soul is like a clean, spotless cloth. But with just one drop it will stain the white fabric. The stain flowing slowly, hiding the pure beauty and bringing forth the opposite soul. A filthy, tainted soul that can't hold any good emotions for others. A corrupted soul full of sorrow and darkness.'
https://www.webnovel.com/book/instinct-the-beginning_24537652806153405
Tiramisur we can do ps swap if you'd like
I would be glad
Tiramisur Done
Rin_Nurnia I sent a power stone too. Just now. Sorry I ran out of them yesterday.