jEONGjEONG And I checked yours out and added it to the library. the synopsis already tickled my interest. I love stories about the outside world!!!!

    KamiKrimson Hi! I'm sorry I only read this now. Currently reading and reviewing yours. I really appreciate your paragraph comments though haha. And I was just wondering what do you mean by the *** in one comment? I would just like to know hehe. Anyways back to reviewing!

        jEONGjEONG Ohhh it's the part where you wrote insert imagepanting* part at chapter 2: space orb. Hahahaha I love the way you write. And the POV is written well. How long have you been writing, may I know? Because as you write I feel like you've been writing for a long time or it's your passion? I'm a real sucker when it comes to "SPACE" themed theories hehehehe. So I'm going to wait for yours big time. I even have a moon shaped tattoo on my arm hahahahaha

            Also, I'm kind of frustrated that we could only have 1 power stone and it's so hard to level up as a reader. I wish I could at least have 4 or 5... I want to give some to a few stories as well. But I can only give 1 power stone to a single story at a time ://

            KamiKrimson To be honest this is my first serious story haha. I've been writing articles ever since I was in high school. But first, about the thing where I will insert an image, I was planning to make an illustration for that part. And this story is a collaboration with my brother. He's still busy though but I asked him to draw the characters and some scenes in the story. Writing has always been my passion and I really admire how poetic novelists are, like the way they use words to describe a certain scenario, it's really fascinating. And I asked for some advice from my friends to see how I can improve my work too :)))))

            I'll just edit out the part where there's supposed to be an image and do that scene during Christmas break. Thank you for noticing!

                KamiKrimson I really love your story, it's straight forward and you can really describe action scenes. your use of vocabulary is so wide. I'm not really good with action and this is my first time writing a story. I don't know what to say, but all I can say to you is that I love your story so much :)))

                    jEONGjEONG wow really? Because by the way you write. It feels like you've been writing stories for quite some time. You're imaginative and your descriptions and command for the language is plausible.

                      jEONGjEONG Thank you so much! Actually this is my first time writing action. I'm actually much better at erotica. LOLOLOL. So I needed to research a lot of those actions scenes hahahahaha

                        Haru_Catty Heyyyy I saw one of your stories. That one entitled Monarch Butterfly... It got me hooked right after the first chapter. Have you finished writing that one?

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