I sadly don't have much freetime to read, but I'll point out a few things I noticed looking at it.
First off, this is the one, correct?
First thing: you could bite into something hard if you don't credit the creator of your book cover, assuming it's not you.
Second, learn how to capitalize the letters in your title, it matters a lot. I could instantly tell you're new, even if you didn't explicitly say.
Third, make a longer synopsis. There's this thing called the 'Holy Trinity of Webnovel': 1, Title. It has to be catchy, interesting. 2, Book Cover. Has to be eyecatching again, you don't want it to look bad, or people won't click. 3, Synopsis. If you don't have an interesting description of your story, how the hell is the reader supposed to pick it out? There's a lot of cool looking covers, and titles, but what decides for most in the end is the synopsis. If you look good, but lack a decent synopsis, no one will read it.
Fourth, choose the way you title your chapters. You don't need to do this, but then stick with Chapter 1, 2, etc. Don't change it halfassedly midway through. On the same note, try not to use the 'The ...' titling system. It's boring, it looks like you don't put effort into it. It's okay once in a while, but not too often.
And Fifth, I don't want to be annoying self-plug person, but take a look at only these details in my novel, for reference only.
I hope I could be of help, and sorry for not being able to read it.
