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chapter 4
"Her black was hair draped over her shoulders." (3rd sentence in)
should be
"Her black hair was draped over her shoulders."

Further down,

  • "Only he’s worth of her," --> worthy; this phrase could end with a period
  • "he only reached Silver rank, had a huge difference compared to Du Ze." --> delete "had"

Thanks!

    jiuyue :O my friend this chapter has been translated for years as for info

        well the translation here is copy posted so i doubt they will edit it

        Ghalad Doesn't mean typos should stay if they can be corrected.
        If that 3rd sentence can be corrected, that's all I ask :sob:

          Peacecraft at least i enjoy when i read it in the past, though it's bad now. So why not? No problem as long as he enjoy when reading it.

              TDG is burnt out of oil. At one point a "heaven breaking" breakthrough literally 2 realms all at once.

                jiuyue you can watch its anime.The story is a bit different in there.Like "Ye zihun's mother" or why mc did not give a cultivation technique to Yang Xin.(Because they are very friendly each other I was wondering very long time.Maybe I missed that part but ıdk ı read 3 times :D And he did not give his mother or father )

                  ShouldBeStudying It's closer to 1 a month. For the past year...

                  464: 9 April
                  463: 9 Mar
                  462: 7 Feb
                  461: 8 Jan
                  460: 7 Dec
                  459: 6 Nov
                  458: 8 Oct
                  457: 10 Sep
                  456: 6 Aug
                  455: 7 Jul
                  454: 2 Jun
                  453: 1 May
                  452: 15 Apr

                    My real question is why you arent reading this on wuxiaworld? Any ad revenue helps, wuxiaworld more so than QI

                      [unknown] Why do you care? I don't like shameless QI but I like this site more than WW.Their site is too slow and looks too dark.

                        JavaKing
                        I just don't want him/her to suffer like I am, waiting to read one very short and rushed chapter once a month.

                        ShouldBeStudying
                        I know he still releases chapters, its just painfully slow since the chapters are horrible since the story is rushed and each chapter is shorter than they have been in the past.

                        There are authors worth supporting, Madsnail is not one of those even if he has some very interesting stories to tell, the fact that he keeps jumping from one novel to the next without properly finishing the current one makes me want to just give him a beat down.
                        But since that is unlikely to happen, most I could do is make sure he earns nothing from me or anyone I know.

                              Peacecraft i'm basically had drop this novel, as it's unbearable with the current pace & degraded quality

                              Frk_ozbk well both have their respective advantages. Just gonna enjoy with what i like. Not bother myself with 'the war'

                                    Peacecraft you just remembered me of one brilliant trilogy Kingskiller chronicles. But the last 3rd book which promises so many expectations failed to come out after 10+ years. The author is alive and fine.

                                      Frk_ozbk Because viewing it here denies the original translator his dues? It's clear you don't know about the light\dark options on BOTH websites.

                                          Peacecraft I can't believe it's been that long since snail man went to monthly :'(

                                              adgsad :D you are a funny guy.WW stole QIDIAN's novel.QIDIAN stole translated novel there is no difference between them.And ı know dark/light theme but still, their site is too dark I think I can create a better site than theirs.BTW ı am a student.

                                              I don't care QI and WW fight

                                              I like how WW do things but I don't like their site,
                                              I like QI site but ı don't like how they do things (And ı like JACK SPARROW)

                                                  5 days later

                                                  Frk_ozbki think saying you can make a better site might be true. But how do you know if you have never done it?

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