Promote Your Stories Here, review swap and comment swap

Mael_ · Oct 29, 2023

Hi, this is my first story published here. I accept any constructive criticism.

synopsis:

"The first memory that overwhelmed my mind as I woke up in this unfamiliar form was the horrifying image of my own father decapitating me,” reminisced Garrick Stormwind, the Archduke of Astrea. Brutally murdered by his own family, he inexplicably finds himself imprisoned in an unknown body, shackled within the confines of a dungeon, consumed by an intense desire for revenge. Join him on his unwavering journey for justice and understanding as we delve into the captivating story of The Revived Archduke's Revenge.

Thank you for your time and support.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-revived-archduke's-revenge_27763328308994605

Mystic_Chronicler · Oct 30, 2023

Hi, I'm open to review swaps, but I need some honest feedback, preferably in paragraph or chapter comments. I know that my novel is lacking, but I can't pinpoint what the problem is (I'm sure it has a lot of issues, but bear with me). If anyone has the time, please help me. Thank you.

You can read my novel here:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

Please read it and let me know what you think.
Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

sad_huh · Nov 6, 2023

ToufiqUlAlam Okay, thanks a lot

Edwin_maliutus · Nov 13, 2023

Danger_God · Nov 13, 2023

Do check out if possible, https://m.webnovel.com/book/nexus-bloodline_25378131106042805

Theothecolossal · Nov 14, 2023

A story about a vampire wanting to know more about life beyond the confines of her castle, to know more about humans and what they go through in their daily lives through literature the only form of entertainment she has in her bleak 500 years, reading stories of adventures and drama that has been documented in human literature.

Soon to fall in love with a human author, a forbidden romance that will last a lifetime, a thriller, drama, and romance all rolled into one as we explore the drama of the past and present in one perfectly wrapped story the couples lying side by side staring up to the night sky, the moon shining on them.

"As I lay with the person I gave my heart to, as I lay by their side for the last time, goodbye, and hopes to a new dawn, to thou I've loved before."

https://www.webnovel.com/book/and-a-new-dawn-to-thou-i've-loved-before_27963397108535305

Edwin_maliutus · Nov 14, 2023

Mystic_Chronicler · Nov 15, 2023

Hi, I’m a new author and I’m looking for some constructive feedback on my novel. It’s called “Mystery in the Whispering Grove” and it’s a fantasy novel with a hint of adventure, action, mystery, and romance.
It’s about Aria and Theo, two chosen Keepers who have to master the elemental powers of Earth, Air, Water, and Fire to protect the ancient Whispering Grove from a dark threat. Along the way, they discover the secrets of light and shadow, truth and illusion, and their own destiny.
If you enjoy stories with magic, mystery, and some adventure, you’ll love this novel. And if you don’t, I’d still value your opinion on how I can improve my writing style and craft a better story.
You can read my novel here:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

Please read it and let me know what you think.
Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

The_Forgotten_Sage · Nov 16, 2023

https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-lost-sanity_25625890306700905
I am also trying to write. If interested let's do collection swap.
Novel name-The Lost Sanity
Synopsis

John, a poor orphan who works as a laborer in a car factory, lives in a run-down building near the old city. One day, he witnesses a man carrying guns being chased by the police, and learns from his friend Nick, a paparazzi, that the man has killed a government official. John decides to stay in the city and go to work as usual, unaware that the area has been declared a terrorist outpost by the Army General, and that soldiers are on their way to kill everyone there. When John returns home, he is shot in the head by an officer who claims to be following orders.
John dies, but his consciousness is transferred to an old sage who is about to die in a different world. John then finds himself reborn as a baby in a woman's womb, in a world full of magic and adventure. John will have to adapt to his new life, use his memories and skills from his previous life, and discover his destiny in this mysterious world.

Rei_AtticusX · Nov 16, 2023

Hello! If you ever have the time, please feel free to check out my story.
Title: Enter Beast World: Starting Anew Without a Protagonist Halo
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/enter-beast-world-starting-anew-without-a-protagonist-halo_27947073900010605

LanumKing · Nov 16, 2023

Rei_AtticusX
Hey i do 3 review swaps daily in my discord sever so if you interested please join and ill review your novel.

Here is my novel - https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-sleepwalker_27803001508526405

Here is the discord server - https://discord.gg/thw99wPTd9

LanumKing · Nov 16, 2023

The_Forgotten_Sage
Hey i do 3 review swaps daily in my discord sever so if you interested please join and ill review your novel.

Here is my novel - https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-sleepwalker_27803001508526405

Here is the discord server - https://discord.gg/thw99wPTd9

LanumKing · Nov 16, 2023

Mystic_Chronicler
Hey i do 3 review swaps daily in my discord sever so if you interested please join and ill review your novel.

Here is my novel - https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-sleepwalker_27803001508526405

Here is the discord server - https://discord.gg/thw99wPTd9

LanumKing · Nov 16, 2023

Theothecolossal
Hey i do 3 review swaps daily in my discord sever so if you interested please join and ill review your novel.

Here is my novel - https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-sleepwalker_27803001508526405

Here is the discord server - https://discord.gg/thw99wPTd9

LanumKing · Nov 16, 2023

Danger_God

Hey i do 3 review swaps daily in my discord sever so if you interested please join and ill review your novel.

Here is my novel - https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-sleepwalker_27803001508526405

Here is the discord server - https://discord.gg/thw99wPTd9

UniqueKarma · Nov 18, 2023

Vanila_Michelle ok please can you check mine out http://wbnv.in/a/18hwVKY

UniqueKarma · Nov 18, 2023

The_Forgotten_Sage yeah i'm down for a swap http://wbnv.in/a/18hwVKY check it out

The_Forgotten_Sage · Nov 19, 2023

UniqueKarma
Added it to the library

Annran · Nov 19, 2023

Holla out there everyone! So am I new? Well not kinda "but its been a long day without you my friend" situation with me here in forum. I was on hiatus exactly 1 year back to this very day. But with everyone's comments and cheer up words which i read I decided to continue and promised to be very regular this time. Atleast I will try my best this time till the end. So I hope you all give my book a reading and tell me how it was previously and add to library. And so I will be grateful. I will be happy to do yours also after that. I promise.
The_Forgotten_Sage UniqueKarma LanumKing @ and others also.
The link is as below.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-lighted-lantern-(arelins)_24425411605345805

SiaReader · Nov 19, 2023

Hi... If anyone interested in reading a Female Lead - Fun Fantasy Adventure Story, please give the book of my friend a read.

ReWorld: The DwarfCat-earedElf
http://wbnv.in/a/2ahzovD

Thanks a lot!!!