Hey guys! Im still new to this writing stuff and i need some critics and advice before moving on.
http://wbnv.in/a/dai9BW2
This novel is only 1 chapter long with the genre fantasy. if you dont mind reading it, i would appreciate your help, thanks
Promote Your Stories Here, review swap and comment swap
Real_dy Hey! I have added all your novel to my library for collection sway only. I would appreciate if you would add mine as well, thanks!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/ex-class-zombie's-husbando_28405062500440305###
Anyone wanna review swap? Here is the link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/perk-mage_28408454700572305
I'm interested. Note that mine is about modern fantasy, (sort of like Omniscient Reader) here's the link https://www.webnovel.com/book/anomalous-focus_28407789200541705
Teaser:
"So why did you take this job"
"I took it to save my little 14 year old sister from a giant ogre who wants to marry her."
here u go! Cyberpunk like story
https://www.webnovel.com/book/ctrl-alt-delusion-%5Bcyberpunk%5D_28390365800004505
Danny, attempting a dramatic flair: "In a world of neon and chaos, enter Ryker – a disillusioned corporate drone turned unemployed philosopher. Behold as he—"
Ryker, interrupting with a smirk: "Philosopher? Really, Danny? More like a guy who just realized his best conversations were with a coffee mug. And let's not get started on the whole 'seeing things' bit."
Danny, a bit deflated but still enthusiastic: "Right, right. So, Ryker here, our very own street prophet, gets the boot from NeuroTech because apparently, talking about invisible data creatures is frowned upon in the corporate world—"
Ryker: "Hey there, dear reader, or listener, or whatever you are. Quick reality check – it's not as glamorous as Danny's making it sound. I got fired, hit a bar, and saw some weird stuff, thanks to my brain's new party trick. And Danny here thinks it's some epic saga."
Danny, chuckling: "Well, when you put it like that... But come on, the part with the mysterious cyber-eyed woman at the bar? That's got to count for something."
Ryker, with a grin: "Yeah, count for making a fool out of myself. But hey, that's just another night in Neon Mirage. One minute you're a hotshot corporate, the next you're chatting up mystery women and passing out on benches. Life's funny that way."
Hello readers and writers.
I will be glad to meet you, read each other and help each other! My book: In My Eyes the Pain of the Whole World.
https://m.webnovel.com/book/in-my-eyes-the-pain-of-the-whole-world_28416178808866105
A dark world of fantasy, adventure, true friendship and an unconventional view of the world. If you like to think and reflect, then my book is for you.
Let's get !
Dummybeing Hello. I added your book. I would appreciate reciprocity.
Makkis_Literal
Hello. I added your book. I would appreciate reciprocity.
KLeo_Gerts Can you review mine. Haha but here's the link if like: http://wbnv.in/a/fci83kH
Time2die Hello. I added your book. I would appreciate reciprocity.
STRAWBERRY_FACTORY Of course I'll read it. I hope you will read my story too)
Hello, could you read my book and give me your opinion? in return I can give an opinion on yours
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https://m.webnovel.com/book/wanted-sunset-moons_24115333706284605
Synopsis:
- May God spare our souls - his eyes focused on an unknown fixed point just before he exploded and brains mixed with eye fluids.
His eyes closed, this time never to open again. Finally he was going home. After the body quickly decomposed the area returned to its usual silence. The only marks that there was life there are the clothes left by him and the smell of death that remained in the place after that day.
Life would probably continue to exist. The cycle of evolution would not stop, but there on that day, one of the most remarkable events in history took place.
The god himself died.
ReWorld: The DwarfCat-earedElf
http://wbnv.in/a/2ahzovD
If you're interested in a Female MC - Fun Fantasy - Adventure Story, please give this novel a read.
Thanks a lot!!!
KLeo_Gerts done
Rhuam_Bomfin Hi I would love to review your work. let me know if you are interested to review mine as well.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/strange-tales-of-a-little-mystic_28024231000703205###?ticket=tted540cc16521476ba035b1a455c85a33&userid=4316411929
KLeo_Gerts Hi I would love to review your work. let me know if you are interested to review mine as well.
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ToufiqUlAlam Thank you, with great pleasure. I added your book. I will appreciate your work)
Vanila_Michelle
Here's my book: http://wbnv.in/a/c6i9HN9
I appreciate an honest review.
I'm interested, here's the basics of mine.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/anomalous-focus_28407789200541705
"Why did you take this job?" XXX asked.
"To save my little sister from a giant sized humanoid ogre who wants to marry her into a global destroying kingdom." MC replied.
The world has opened a new chapter as the old world has fallen, very few were granted special abilities. Some use them for good and others for their own needs. Kyran Anderson is a 14-year-old boy who after excitedly going where he always wanted to go, ends up in an unfortunate event and a system box in his vision. Now he strives to prevent a foretold catastrophe and protect his loved. Follow his journey as he becomes, Anomalous.