[unknown] hello author, how would you like me to proof-read? Should I just leave comments on the work?

    To reborn is to live
    Is a story about a 21 year old girl in a world of God's and magic

    This is my first book so any constructive feedback is welcome right now there are 2 chapters posted
    http://wbnv.in/a/9fghANq

    if you do review swap then just ping me and let me know so I could review yours thanks in advance

      Pen Name: chery_cabral
      Series: # 1 (already have 10K. reads/views so thank you!)
      Status: Completed
      Short Synopsis:
      Wander to the unknown,
      Strange magic on site
      Meet 'Beasts' of different kind.,
      My Dear Reader,
      I welcome you to
      the 'Kingdom of Alementalia'.
      "So, how did you become a Hero?'"
      "By saving Half of Them and destroying My Kind."
      Link: WebNovel: https://www.webnovel.com/book/tale-of-the-demon-hero_22212073906184805

      Series: #2
      Status: Serializing
      Short Synopsis: Wander to the unknown,
      Strange magic on site
      Meet 'Beasts' of different kind.

      My Dear Reader,
      I, the 'Catalyst', welcome you to
      My fallen Kingdom

      "They asked for more time...
      So in exchange, time,
      Itself will be taken away
      From them as well."

      Link: WebNovel: https://www.webnovel.com/book/tale-of-the-demon-ruler_22216817005998105

      Comments, reactions and etc. are highly appreciated. Thank you in advance.

        Pen Name: chery_cabral
        Series: # 1 (already have 10K. reads/views so thank you!)
        Status: Completed
        Short Synopsis:
        Wander to the unknown,
        Strange magic on site
        Meet 'Beasts' of different kind.,
        My Dear Reader,
        I welcome you to
        the 'Kingdom of Alementalia'.
        "So, how did you become a Hero?'"
        "By saving Half of Them and destroying My Kind."
        Link: WebNovel: https://www.webnovel.com/book/tale-of-the-demon-hero_22212073906184805

        Series: #2
        Status: Serializing
        Short Synopsis: Wander to the unknown,
        Strange magic on site
        Meet 'Beasts' of different kind.

        My Dear Reader,
        I, the 'Catalyst', welcome you to
        My fallen Kingdom

        "They asked for more time...
        So in exchange, time,
        Itself will be taken away
        From them as well."

        Link: WebNovel: https://www.webnovel.com/book/tale-of-the-demon-ruler_22216817005998105

        Comments, reactions and etc. are highly appreciated. Thank you in advance.

          The name of my book - our mafia love
          Pen name - author queen
          Status- ongoing

            please review, read and add my story to your library and I will do yours as well
            https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/21728014005164805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4316047477
            { Slow Burn Action Romance Story}

            #romance #action # childhood sweethearts
            Warning : mature content, more will be told as the book continues

            Let no one escape,
            These were the horrific words that filled the air , on the day that changed Mario's and Cathalia's life's forever .

            Two children brought up in the suburban area of Tabitha made a single promise to themselves , to never be away from each other but found that single promise hard to fulfill , after they where taken away by traffickers , tortured beyond repair , the damages made to their body and soul forced them to the fiery depths of hell , in nothing with their souls but revenge.

            Year's later they where finally freed after being rescued . They vowed to take revenge on the leaders of the trafficking society.

            He became the mafia cartel boss
            She became the leader of a distinguished security organization

            After being a victim of accident in an undercover mission she lost her memory leading her to forsake her life goal and finding her half Mario.
            After meeting in an awkward situation
            she remembers her past ,
            but how will they achieve it in their occupation . Will they find the happiness and peace they deserve, join us as we engage on a rollercoaster of emotions.

            They are with only one plan in mind to
            find their other half and take
            REVENGE

            please this is a slow book and I promise to always post regular
            Please follow my Instagram @prayersule

              _AUTHOR_QUEEN I did your book a review and inserted some comments, mostly are suggestion for your book, but would you mind doing mine?

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