Hello, I have a book that would really like to be reviewed, can you read and comment down the flaws and all? Or your opinions, I'd appreciate it.

    [unknown] yaaaasss I'm gonna read it now! Can you post the link though, can't find it on your profile

    [unknown] Not a problem. This is nice of you so please take it easy and go at whatever pace you can manage. Don't be afraid to stop reading mine or any other people's novels too bcz you can only do so much. Take your time. You're only human (:

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      [Mature Content, No Rape.]

      He caressed her smooth and soft cheeks and with a deep and husky voice he said "Now you listen to me Miss Katherine Kenneth, there is no way in hell I would ever let you go! You are mine to love, mine to cherish, mine to touch, mine to hold, mine to grow old with, and even if we grow old and die my soul would still search for yours and make you mine, you are mine and mine alone and I would have it no any other way." There was dangerous edge in his tone.

      Katherine felt a cold shiver run down her spine and when she looked at his dangerous yet beautiful brown eyes and his irresistible sexy lips she gulped, she was about to open her mouth and protest when he suddenly crashed his lips to hers and began kissing her passionately.
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      Katherine Kenneth was an innocent sweet and naive girl who wants nothing but to be loved and happy, having grown up as a neglected child, she always craved for love and affection from her parents and siblings but she never got it so ever since she was a child she learned to hide her true feelings and how soft her heart was by distancing herself and acting tough, one day she met a handsome rich man who married her only to annulled their marriage before their wedding night and sell her off to the monsters who experiment on women trying to create something they called (BEPBU)

      No woman has ever survived their experiments but Katherine did, she was luckily able to escape and bowed to seek revenge on the people that harmed her. On her journey to revenge she came across a man who calling him beautiful was an understatement but he was a beast and a ruthless king of the underworld, Katherine and Xander Ling fell in love with each other but Katherine was too afraid of being betrayed again so she shut out her feelings and refused to accept his love.

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