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Hello! I read your book but seriously I couldn't find anything to nitpick. You are writing a beautiful story and as a fellow who is just trying to write, I have just simple advice - Don't ever forget why you started writing. Write for yourself not for others.
By the way back to business haha, I have just reviewed your book and I hope you will take out time to review mine too.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/2760-evolution_22366832805911005