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Legend of Bumi

Synopsis :

Lie opened his eyes. Lost half of his memories. Only part of knowledge of remains. This is not earth he know anymore. Wonderfull sky, weird animals he never see, and abundant beautifull grass he never find before. Yes, this is sure another realm.

Then he meet with Nero who work under Cross Guard organization that serve as goods delivery. The first one he must do is battle test with weapon to join them. He realize that this new world is harsh. Kill or be killed is an ordinary in here.

However, Lie don't have other choice. For survive, he must using his earth Martial Arts technique at the fullest, combined with Mana, magic concept on that world.

With this new life, Lie want to show everyone who underestimate him, climbing his path to become on the top of goods delivery employe, and rivalling againts Nero even on the matter of love to get Rint interest, a beauty who also work on that organization.

This story will lead you to the big conflict of Terra, the new world. The battle of Star Bringer, that will deciding fate of humankind.

https://m.webnovel.com/book/10692326305135205?keyword=Legend%20of%20bumi&source=search

    Hey fellow Original Writers!
    I am new to the Qidan site and have also posted my novel here.https://www.webnovel.com/book/10645692205088805/The-Red-Lands
    I don't have much to offer as I am seeking information on Writing and Publishing, but I can share some knowledge on what I might have found out.
    Good Luck cramping those hands while writing...:)

      Yohanlie It is evident that English is not your first language, I do not fault you for such being the case, however, i critique you: Grammar is something that will either lure or put off many readers, if the grammar is not correct, many will think the story too confusing to understand and give up. I honestly think that the idea sounds amazing , and I have added it to my library, however, it feels like a toddler is writing this, something I, but not many others, would read.
      @DKQ may be able to help you better with grammar, I don't know how to help with such for someone without English as their first language, no experience, However, DKQ uses excellent grammar, and has English as his/her third language if I remember right.

      • DKQ replied to this.

          DeJeL I see my name I check it out, the third language you are correct, it was quite difficult to adapt at first but due to self-learning, I am able to adapt after a few months of trying to understand. It is all about your basics, basics are your foundation, it is your point A, with it you can build up everything else and will be easily done after a few days to weeks (basic and not advanced). Reading is one way to solve it but I personally can recommend testing your self by writing it down on a piece of paper instead of the doing it on pc and going through what you wrote, it is the best method to adapt to any language and the best way to fix your mistakes.

              DeJeL
              Thank you.
              I know this hard to do it.
              Until i improved my english, i will try to use simple verse on my novel.

                  9 days later

                  Can I kindly asked for an honest review and feedback on my webnovel? There's almost no review/rate in my novel. I wished I could improve myself in writing, especially English is not my first language but I'm working hard to make the best out of it.

                  Tales of the Demi-Human.

                  Follow the journey of a fallen human as he paves his way to find his purpose and becoming a human again in the world filled with demon races and sacred beasts, sword and magic, and.....wait, is that cultivators?

                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/10746660906154505/Tales-of-the-Demi-Human

                  hi! Sorry for being shameless.
                  Here once again I want to promote my novel but this one os fanfic RTW

                  Title release that boy!
                  https://m.webnovel.com/book/10814343706176005

                  What would you do if you met one of your favorite Novel MC in another world?

                  Will you be stunned, screamed hysterically, happy or Sad?

                  Or maybe you want to plot on how to make him fall in love with you?

                  Just like me.

                  But that is impossible! Maybe it's impossible! But, well, unless God is bored or being nice to me then He will help me for to execute my silly plan.

                  It would be easier to work If I'm a girl. But unfortunately I'm now a boy! Boy!

                  A former woman that trasmigrated as a young boy! And try to make my favorite MC fall for me

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