Icehall
- Oct 26, 2018
- Joined May 13, 2018
Can I kindly asked for an honest review and feedback on my webnovel? There's almost no review/rate in my novel. I wished I could improve myself in writing, especially English is not my first language but I'm working hard to make the best out of it.
Tales of the Demi-Human.
Follow the journey of a fallen human as he paves his way to find his purpose and becoming a human again in the world filled with demon races and sacred beasts, sword and magic, and.....wait, is that cultivators?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/10746660906154505/Tales-of-the-Demi-Human
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HI there, I'm requesting for a review.
The title is "Tales of the Demi-Human"
https://www.webnovel.com/book/10746660906154505/Tales-of-the-Demi-Human
Genre : Fantasy, Adventure, Romance
Author's opinion : I love my story, but I think I still lacked some variation in my sentence. I need some review and improvement on the dialogue part also especially in the third chapter. In latest chapter (fourth chapter), I'm satisfied with the dialogue part but would be glad to hear your opinion. English is not my first language but I tried very hard to make the best out of it, so I'll really appreciate it if you can give a honest feedback to improve myself.
Recently a chapter in two days.
Thank you so much for your kind intention to promote original authors.
Please try mine and if possible, please give an honest feedback and review as I look forward to improve myself. It's a fantasy-adventure story filled with romance.
Tales of the Demi-Human.
Synopsys :
Follow the journey of a fallen human as he paves his way to find his purpose and becoming a human again in the world filled with demon races and sacred beasts, sword and magic, and.....wait, is that cultivators?Hi there, I wished I could get feedback and honest review of my novel. The title is "Tales of the Demi-Human".
It's about a modern human got transported to another world, but instead of being a hero that save the world, he met misfortune and cursed as a demi-human instead. It has romance as a quite a major subplot also and no harem.This is the synopsys :
Follow the journey of a fallen human as he paves his way to find his purpose and becoming a human again in the world filled with demon races and sacred beasts, sword and magic, and.....wait, is that cultivators?Link :
https://www.webnovel.com/book/10746660906154505/Tales-of-the-Demi-Human- Edited
Maybe you could try mine? It's a mixed of western and eastern fantasy where sword and magic meets cultivator, although the cultivation is not the main plot here. The title is "Tales of the Demi-Human"
https://www.webnovel.com/book/10746660906154505/Tales-of-the-Demi-Human
Hey, Good review.
I wrote an "isekai" novel too, though it's not really get the usual Japanese LN Isekai feel.
"Tales of the Demi-Human"https://www.webnovel.com/book/10746660906154505/Tales-of-the-Demi-Human