Hello, guys. Let's have a review swap. You review mine, I review yours. When I do a review, I ensure I have read at least 3 to 5 chapters of your story. It will be an honest one, including the syntax errors I could find, the world-building possible improvements, and any possible things to comment on concerning your story(ies). Btw, below is my story.
Title: Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System
Yang Lujia, a sought-after, handsome, sports-driven, perfect man with an outstanding family background, was killed in a plane bombing orchestrated by his so-called pals. Before he even knew it, his soul traveled through space, and his supposed-to-be ending unexpectedly took turns.
Unknowingly, he set foot into a world made up of five realms where strength matters most. Then, one day, following a mission, he started accepting disciples.