Arirosiex thank you ver much for reaching out. Not to make it complicated, I am fine if you just give your very first perceptions about the stories.

    chery_cabral Hello! Thanks for the review, looking back at it, I see a lot of commas. That is just how I typically write. I tend to sound things out how I would perceive they are spoken, if that makes sense. Looking at my topic above, it is clear that I love my commas. Lol. Thanks again. ^^

      Arirosiex I also like honest reviews more. Tho its fine now since u have already reviewed it. I will be doing yours now.

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