Lu_Shui Don't get me wrong, I like the whole story itself. It's just that I was bored at the first chapter, but going down I got into it.
Anything you want for PS!
It looks like no one came for my PS deal. So I'm back here at your shop.
I'd like 2 orders of Paragraph comment, one for the second paragraph in chapter one "Abnormal Occurrence", and another for any random paragraph in any chapter you choose (Not the auxiliary chapters though.)
The Payment will be sent to your PS bank Immediately.
Side note:
Were you the one who placed my book "Me Me Me (You?)" In your collection? If so, then thank you very much.
Cheers.
I know, I know.
But was the prologue so boring? Maybe I should hype it up 
I shall perform the comments now 
No, but I will add it now because it seems that you want to have more colls 
Free of charge, no worries.
Lu_Shui It was more a problem of suspense and anticipation rather than the idea of the prologue itself.
Lu_Shui Wow, thank you so much.
I think I should dish out another chapter for that book since it's drawing people with just one chapter for months.
You should! 
The thing is that below 4k words it is not vetted yet. You should publish at least 4k!
I removed the prologue. I guess the first chapter is decent enough as a prologue.
Need to give Lillian treats. LOL.
Review done!
Lu_Shui Ty! I will send 2 from my acc and 1 from another. 
Lu_Shui Nooo...Why?
Lu_Shui I'm brainstorming the next chapter.
I'm a pantser after all.
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Looks like there are potential takers for my Power Stone deal.
If the end of WN's official day draws close and the PS deal does not come into effect, I'll be here for another order.
And if the deal does go through, then I won't be able to buy from this shop for the next 3 weeks.
I'll still read the upcoming chapters of your book though, I just won't be able to give PSs.
Cya. And thank you again for your business.
Cheers.
didn't you say it was unappealing?
It was just a little glimpse of the past anyway. No biggie hehehe.
Ok sweetie, I will still be here for more business deals 
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It looks like I can make an order after all. I'll have another order of Paragraph comment. But only one this time.
Same as last time, (any random paragraph you choose, doesn't matter which chapter.)
I'll send the PS right away.
Order completed!
I additionally checked out your auxillary volume and WAOW.
Please don't stop writing. This is promising to be epic 
Lu_Shui Well thank you there. I was very self conscious about my writing. In fact, I still think it lacks that adventurous touch I want it to have.
But regardless, this motivates me to continue on with my work. I'm truly thankful.
The prologue totally screams adventure
Can't wait to see what you have in store!
Lu_Shui Wait...You read the current chapters off that fast? OMG, that's some next level reading.