Hi, I’m a new author and I’m looking for some constructive feedback on my novel. It’s called “Mystery in the Whispering Grove” and it’s a fantasy novel with a hint of adventure, action, mystery, and romance.
It’s about Aria and Theo, two chosen Keepers who have to master the elemental powers of Earth, Air, Water, and Fire to protect the ancient Whispering Grove from a dark threat. Along the way, they discover the secrets of light and shadow, truth and illusion, and their own destiny.
If you enjoy stories with magic, mystery, and some adventure, you’ll love this novel. And if you don’t, I’d still value your opinion on how I can improve my writing style and craft a better story.
You can read my novel here:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

Please read it and let me know what you think.
Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 😊

    2 months later

    I'm looking for review swaps. Accepting the first five stories. Limited to two chapters, original stories only.

      Hello, could you read my book and give me your opinion? in return I can give an opinion on yours

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      https://m.webnovel.com/book/wanted-sunset-moons_24115333706284605

      Synopsis:

      • May God spare our souls - his eyes focused on an unknown fixed point just before he exploded and brains mixed with eye fluids.

      His eyes closed, this time never to open again. Finally he was going home. After the body quickly decomposed the area returned to its usual silence. The only marks that there was life there are the clothes left by him and the smell of death that remained in the place after that day.

      Life would probably continue to exist. The cycle of evolution would not stop, but there on that day, one of the most remarkable events in history took place.

      The god himself died.

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        If you're interested in a Female MC - Fun Fantasy - Adventure Story, please give this novel a read.

        Thanks a lot!!!

          4 days later

          KetchupxD
          Hi... If anyone interested in Female MC - Fun Fantasy Adventure Story, please give this book a read.
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          If you're interested in Action Adventure - Drark Fantasy Story, please give this book a read too.
          Goddess's Assassin
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          I hope you can consider adding it to your collection... Thanks a lot!!!

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