I am a new Author and i don't know much about other preference,so I need a proofreader for my work which is participating in wsa 2022,
My novel name is "Dooms At The Corner"
Free Proof reader need
So basically you are just looking for a quick editorial of your work?
DRone misspellings, proper grammar, story flow recommendations, etc?
Myles_Meyer yes
Myles_Meyer yes and dailog build also
Well I work almost ten hours a day so I don't have a lot of time other than the weekends and I'm assuming we have vastly different time zones but I'd be happy to help as best I can
Myles_Meyer so will you proofread my novel ?
Here's some free tips, based on what I saw briefly.
Incorrect punctuation usage
Ughh...,
[...] stabbed in their back.No Harsya soldiers returned there, From there [...]
Incorrect spacing after punctuations. Incorrect capitalizations.
I am Kogen Starlezia,15 years old Boy,
Incorrect word usage and incorrect grammatical sentence structure
This dream of being in hell is become [grammatically incorrect] a habit from my childhood as per [word usage] I remember.
Maybe the verb you were looking for there was was for is become. As per, on the other hand, need an object to reference. As per what?
Lots of missing punctuations, capitalizations needed. Fragmented sentences. It's hard to read past all that to get to the actual meat of the story itself.
My recommendation: use google docs, and use the spell checker there to get rid of these simple mistakes.