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Ishaisa thanks and keep supporting me....

Ishaisa l have read a few chapters not all of them as my exam is ahead and l have to prepare for it...so can't give much time in it....
But l promise to support u in the future....l have also added ur story to my library.... And l'll read when l'll get some free time...
Thank u...

_Rockbison_ It's completely alright. Prepare well for your exam. Good Luck!!

_Rockbison_ I corrected a few of the mistakes in the first five chapters. As for the story, I would say that it would have been better if their breakup would have been described in more detail. Just because of a misunderstanding and they didn't even try to clear it or you can describe that Xia was wrong and that relationships don't work like that. Also, you can describe fusion I little more like how it formed, when, and why everyone fears them so much. Also, I noticed you always write university as versity. other than that it's a great plot, I liked how she is crazy about food. And I laughed a lot after reading the name of the university I don't if I am right about the name of the university or if it was just a coincidence. You are doing great. All the best for your exams.
You can feel free to ask anything else.

Altansarnai thank u very much for ur feed back...
If l need anything in the future l'll surely disturb u
And l hope u will also tell me to do anything and l'll for sure try to do that...
Thank u my friend...

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_Rockbison_ I don't know if you know this but you can edit your chapter.I will delete those comments then because I don't think it feels nice to have some corrections in the comments . And you should ask for a proofreader or an editor here. I am sure someone would be willing to do it for you. By that you will be able to gain some readers. I am only suggesting you.

Altansarnai your correction has helped me a lot..... After ur corrections l have also tried to reread the next chapters and corrected my mistakes.....
But my exam is in 2 days and so l couldn't give more attention to it... But l appreciate ur work. Thank u so much my friend... It means a lot to me... And plzzz keep supporting me...Also l'll surely correct my all mistake after my exam will exam....
Thank u....

_Rockbison_ No prob. I am also having exams . All the best

Altansarnai thank u.... All tge to u too

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