Derrrorr hey l've reviewed ur story..... Although there is not many chapters and so l couldn't say more....but try my best...

But one thing that I wanted to tell but didn't say it there as l was the first one to comment... So l thought it could be rude... But let me say it hear tgat u should have given the dialogues some expressions like after the apostophy finish try to tell people what was their expressions to make it more fun...
( Did u understand what l am trying to say😅😅) hope so....

Btw here is my link... Plzz do read a few chapters before reviewing it....thank u...
https://m.webnovel.com/book/her-one-smile_23552320306522305

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